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ME (ALL OF ME) My life revolves around your emotional pull. My heart thumps when I feel that we are not a couple. Our life must interweave. For today, I am not the loser. Our beings must not fray. For tomorrow, we both win. We are not against each other. We are the simple things. We are life complexity. You are all of me. Our disagreements are few. Our high and lows, we both know. We are similar in thought; however, we are quite different. Diversity this gives intimate and fulfilling. Just yesterday, you asked me do you augment my appearance. I responded and said, “You are all of me.” [16 Lines] __________________________________________________________________ We are not against each other. We are the simple things. We are life complexity. You are all of me. We walk together. We share our thoughts. We are so in love. We overlook our faults. We know that we are obligated to each other needs. In all said, you are all of me! [10 Lines] (This part is not to be included in the contest [Note: Unless the sponsor desires its inclusion]. This part is included to share the enter poem. Thanks for your cooperation in this entry. As a Poet, I would have cheated the reader, if I did not give all of me. :)s and hugs... Verlena S. Walker. Please read the Remix - ME (All of Me), which is the song.) ______________________________________________________________________ Sponsor: F. J. Thomas Contest Name: Sing To My Heart Entry Date: March 11, 2014 Motif: You are all of me. ~Please read About This Poem~

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Date: 3/16/2014 12:07:00 PM
For me I connect more emotionally with part two, it feels more real and has a more natural warm flow.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 3/16/2014 12:19:00 PM
Thanks Richard. I did not cheat my reader and that was the intention to have you connect how you feel; therefore, I posted all of me. :)s and hugs... Verlena
Date: 3/12/2014 8:35:00 AM
Lovely poem...this sounds like a winner to me!!!
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 3/12/2014 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Pace... Verlena
Date: 3/11/2014 6:00:00 PM
Great work for the contest..Winning material in my book..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 3/11/2014 8:16:00 PM
My book first Sara... Thanks for stopping by... Verlena

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