Poet's Notes

Yes, I give all of my haiku titles, although if it is a string of haku, only one title for all of it. Bobby Tojo and Grandfather Shiraito told me it is permissable. Grandfather read 3 sheets of my early haiku that Bobby Tojo had asked him to read, when he had finished, (they were in Hiroshoma where Grandfather lives,) Bobby Tojo asked Grandfather how he liked it, and Bobby said GF smiled a little, something he never does, and said, "ahhhh Vee Bdosa drinking too much Saki..." Bobby says that is an approval from Grandfather Shiraito.

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Pussy cat in heat
tom cat prowling down the street
is your kitty spayed?

© Ron Wilson aka Vee Bdosa the Doylestown poet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 7/22/2017 12:32:00 PM
well crafted into an eye-romancing beauty... Your lines and words are just lovely... Its nice visiting one of your pages again..
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