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This will be a trilogy, I dont mean to make these always riddles, but I will most likely explain these poems via the blog when all are posted. However, feel free take a guess until then!

The day she was stolen The skies turned black Locust ate at our very souls In the name of God I shout why? The flowers of Hendon Surround a black tombstone How fitting That as I see the blackness of that day in stone The flowers around joyously sing to me Bismillah Our Sweetheart Sings

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Date: 11/11/2015 3:16:00 PM
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Date: 6/14/2015 1:45:00 AM
here is my guess -- 786 is the total value of the letters of Bismillah al-Rahman al-Rahim. Some use this number to refer to Allah. Your words of abduction and sorrow cry loudly to a seemly quiet God but with creation singing softly to our souls It pays to read the previous comments!!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/14/2015 7:57:00 AM
wish I'd put that too lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/13/2015 7:35:00 PM
Arthur, this is mysterious, I have no clue but do know your poem is beautifully penned and thanks for visiting my poem, decay
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arthur vaso
Date: 5/30/2016 5:10:00 PM
oh and “786”, is the numerical translation of Bismillah, which Arabic basically means "in the name of God"
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arthur vaso
Date: 5/30/2016 5:04:00 PM
I always seems to miss answering some comments, thanks Broken Wings, she was a famous Pakistani singer who passed away from cancer.
Date: 6/13/2015 6:12:00 PM
I am guessing a link with Freddie mercury - looking forward to the next installment:-) hugs Jan xx
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arthur vaso
Date: 6/13/2015 11:36:00 PM
I can see how you guessed that, but you are not far off the mark! :)
Date: 6/13/2015 3:12:00 PM
engrossing work of art.. looking forward to the next installment,arthur.. huggs
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arthur vaso
Date: 6/13/2015 11:33:00 PM
Thanks nette, and David was bang on in his guess, well as to the title!
Date: 6/13/2015 7:36:00 AM
The poem is intriguing and David's comment adds to the Intrigue. She is or was a pretty young lady. I will follow your trilogy.
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arthur vaso
Date: 6/13/2015 11:33:00 PM
Thanks Richard, just did second one!
Date: 6/12/2015 11:58:00 PM
OK, here is my guess -- 786 is the total value of the letters of Bismillah al-Rahman al-Rahim. Some use this number to refer to Allah. Your words of abduction and sorrow cry loudly to a seemly quiet God but with creation singing softly to our souls. Well, I said it was a guess!! Look forward to the rest and your blog.
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arthur vaso
Date: 6/13/2015 11:22:00 PM
Wow you are bang on David, thats it, the next one you will know of whom I am speaking!