6 Words

On the seventh day he died.





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David Byrne 2009

Entry for Raul's contest

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Andrea Dietrich

February 5, 2010 at 8:55 PM

wow, this is great, David. If you are not one of my fav poets yet, I am making you one tonight. Hope you don't mind that suggestion I gave you on the other poem tonight. If you do that , it will really clean up your plural nouns! Luv, Andrea

Audrey Haick

January 4, 2010 at 2:19 PM

A true masterpiece, David! Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest! Great job! Peace, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 26, 2009 at 6:20 AM

Congrats David on your winning poem in Raul's contest .. wonderful words and well deserved win... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie

Elaine George

December 26, 2009 at 5:24 AM

Dear David, Congratulations on your well deserved win in Raul's contest with this very touching Epigram. Wishing you all the best in the New Year. Lainie