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On the seventh day he died. ------------------------------------- David Byrne 2009 Entry for Raul's contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/5/2010 8:55:00 PM

wow, this is great, David. If you are not one of my fav poets yet, I am making you one tonight. Hope you don't mind that suggestion I gave you on the other poem tonight. If you do that , it will really clean up your plural nouns! Luv, Andrea

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/4/2010 2:19:00 PM

A true masterpiece, David! Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest! Great job! Peace, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/26/2009 6:20:00 AM

Congrats David on your winning poem in Raul's contest .. wonderful words and well deserved win... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie

Elaine George

Date: 12/26/2009 5:24:00 AM

Dear David, Congratulations on your well deserved win in Raul's contest with this very touching Epigram. Wishing you all the best in the New Year. Lainie

James Fraser

Date: 12/26/2009 5:14:00 AM

David, many congratulations in your placing in Raul's fine contest, Merry Christmas to you and your family >> James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/26/2009 4:02:00 AM

Very profound statement that you have made here. Good luck in the contest. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/25/2009 11:08:00 PM

David, Merry Christmas and congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 12/24/2009 11:49:00 PM

Great Epigram, leaving me wondering who. Good luck on Raul's contest. Merry Christmas, Caroline.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/24/2009 5:48:00 AM

Maybe death was the only answer.

Constance La France

Date: 12/23/2009 9:41:00 PM

stunning in its message... best of luck in the contest.. and thanks so much for your comment on my poetry... very much appreciated..