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6 To 8- Melody of Sadness

An aria of spiritual apathy is flowing in my reverie of woe. I’ve endured g r i e f beyond the euphony of a metered tune and am lost inside harmony’s lyrical chorus. Ballads of verses contain my o b s c u r e existence, and I am forever heartbroken from the noise of a detestable vocalist. Despondent and desolated, my ears bleed for chanting rhythm of love, but I am s i n k i n g, drowning in a sea of wounded wretchedness. I embrace this MELODY OF SADNESS, forgotten...yet heard in misery’s refrain. 6 to 8 Poetry Contest Nette Onclaud October 24, 2017

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Date: 11/1/2017 8:44:00 AM
Congratulations Laura. Your poem is awesome. A true master of poetry or in this case maestro.
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Date: 10/31/2017 4:52:00 PM
This is outstanding poetry writing Laura, such dark overtones I hardly ever see in your previous writes but you nailed it perfectly, Congrats on your win
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Date: 10/31/2017 3:07:00 PM
a remarkable melody teeming with dark tones, lou...fine congrats on your high win and thanks for being part of the contest...
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Date: 10/31/2017 12:48:00 AM
Congratulations Laura on your fine win.
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Date: 10/30/2017 4:51:00 PM
Congratulations, Laura, for a great write ! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/30/2017 4:35:00 PM
Sadly beautiful, Laura. Congratulations on your nice podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/30/2017 2:57:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Laura - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/24/2017 6:02:00 PM
such imagery, Laura. You really took on this challenge to wow us. I am drawn to that topic too!! But maybe I will choose one of the others. All three are really nice.
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Date: 10/24/2017 8:32:00 PM
Thank you sweet Andrea, you are the best!
Date: 10/24/2017 3:32:00 PM
Sometimes, there really aren't any words except wow.
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/24/2017 8:32:00 PM
Awww.thank you DM! Take care

Book: Shattered Sighs