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6 To 8--Rag Doll

Remembrances  tightly sealed in an old 
Victorian trunk, cast off-- how we escaped 
from a voodoo doll needled, chained – its  button eyes 
plucked from a sorceress' wicked incantations,
leaving traces of Grandma’s unknown lunacy—

though we moved away, that ragged hem , torn limbs
of a puppet, still stabs me when full of moon drowns me.



Oct 25, 2017
6 TO 8 Contest hosted by Nette Onclaud
Theme--Rag Doll

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/31/2017 4:47:00 PM
Wow this is so very creative rendition of a rag doll for this theme, congrats on your win
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Date: 10/31/2017 2:59:00 PM
ohh, i never thought of doll this way; very original... big congrats on your top spot... thanks for creating this for the contest, ashley..
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Date: 10/30/2017 4:50:00 PM
Congratulations, Ashley, Wow!! a great write ! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/30/2017 2:54:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Ashley - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/26/2017 9:02:00 AM
Fantastic! My best to you for the contest :) xomo!
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