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We’ll last forever, or at least till December. Love is for always, or till it grows cold. Youth is undying, spring is eternal, Or till hair turns white and leaves turn gold. Truth is beauty and is unending, At least till someone finds a much better line. Joy is a fountain, that never stops flowing, Or at least until the effects wear off from the wine.

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Jeffry Cohan

Date: 11/12/2011 8:18:00 AM

i dig the whole theme but the last line me thinkest thou knowest me too well...'truth is beauty' you want to know what paradise is it;s a fantasy recreated by people and places as we'd like them to be but you know what truth is it's that little baby you're holding in your arms -truth is the man you fought with this morning, the same man you're going to make love to tonight THAT'S TRUTH---THAT'S LOVE now the sad part i didn't write it youtube charlene "never been to me" for a woman forget it then for a woman you tube "butterfly kisses' country version girl u can write! ~free cee!~ phreepoetree

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/10/2011 5:09:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Ashley. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol