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6200 Days

Got your text since you won't call My nerves go crazy, My hand shakes Standing in the record store I'm about to break I leave, Drive home, Hear message alerts on my Alcatel phone All this texting..give me a break! Once again not listening. I've said few times before You text an issue, I'll ignore You got a problem call! Yo, we'll solve it.. Not for you? Obviously a solution isn't what your about Just getting *****off your chest Now I got beef No call means you don't care At least it suggests My mind doesn't matter to you I say things, you laugh But not with me, At me, like a virus email blast Well, I'm done. People get what they deserve, I deserve better, I'm not above or below you But a real relationship can't exist via text When we hang out, Always myself Get home Few hours later You have a problem with a joke Oh my gosh, Stop being so touchy And you say I'm the one being grumpy? Doesn't go your way Seems your cutting strings with everyone in the play It's not all you, It's my fault too Some may argue I'm mentally handicapped But 6200 days this was long overdue

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Date: 5/1/2013 2:23:00 AM
6200 days only a blink of an eye, that is until the main question becomes why, doubt sets oh gosh is that another text, what will be discussed next, really I don't mean to pry, Is this part of the journey at an end, or are their more texts to send, is it indifference or fear that makes him cower, imagining the sound of your voice he's without power, I think I may have an ear to lend,
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The Shadowremains
Date: 5/1/2013 2:28:00 AM
Your heart good, but life is bad, you answer with anger, even when sad, you're strong, independant, that I see, also patient and caring to a degree, maybe it's time to be selfish, just a tad
Date: 4/26/2013 12:20:00 PM
Hi Sharon, Thanks for stopping by! I love the whole idea of 6200 days....original expression of love-time-elapse! love the back and forth in your head.....fun messed up! jumbo
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