6000 Miles From Home

"Each experience is locked within my heart and only I hold the key..."

Stifling heat,hectic surroundings,locals their lifestyle
politeness,honesty stems from karma overwhelming profile
hardworking for a pitance,food to provide
sending money to the village,the family to divide.

Monies earned in cities,triple valued north
tourist prices enable the workers to go forth.
Youths sleeping beneath cardboard,such a crying shame
reds and blues collide,goverment all to blame.


On arriving home,no possibility to explain
the differance Thailand throws from luxury to the pain
however life goes on,in Pattaya o so what a thrill
to walk the golden dragon stairs, the giant Buddah on the hill.


Paul Beadnall for:

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Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~ 

Contest Name
A Fragment Of Life
 21/8/11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/2/2011 5:05:00 AM
An interesting read Paul. I could visualize these hard working people. well written and thank you for your kind words to me. regards Marg
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Date: 9/2/2011 7:43:00 AM
Thank you Margret,i really enjoyed writing this one. I will look forward toreading more of your poetry,blessings from Paul
Date: 8/28/2011 1:15:00 AM
congratulations on your win. Showing those class differences. It is very apparent in so many parts of our world. I remember seeing it when I traveled a bit in my youth. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/27/2011 7:07:00 PM
Ah the things you learn when you travel. Beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing it. Lee
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Date: 8/26/2011 5:11:00 PM
Congratulations Paul, on your 2nd place in my contest with this wonderful poem~~
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/26/2011 6:20:00 PM
Thank you for your choice of theme,cheers blessings from Paul
Date: 8/25/2011 2:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Keep it up. Tony
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Date: 8/25/2011 6:58:00 PM
Cheers Tony appreciated mate blessings from Paul
Date: 8/25/2011 2:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Constance's "A Fragment of Life" contest Paul. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/25/2011 6:55:00 PM
Cheers Carol much appreciated love n blessings from Paul
Date: 8/25/2011 12:19:00 PM
go , paul...sunny congrats on your special win :) huggs
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/25/2011 1:24:00 PM
Thanks alot Nette,appreciated as always blessings from Paul.
Date: 8/25/2011 12:09:00 PM
Congrats on your win in this great contest..Sara
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Date: 8/25/2011 1:20:00 PM
Thanks very much Sara, always appreciated blessings from Paul
Date: 8/25/2011 11:02:00 AM
Congrats Paul...Im 12000 miles from home so I can relate to this well.. Trace xxx
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Date: 8/25/2011 11:39:00 AM
Thanks very much Tracie,so glad you see through my sights also blessings Paul x
Date: 8/25/2011 10:59:00 AM
Congrats Paul on your special win with this excellent expression in poetry luv.. enjoy..
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Date: 8/25/2011 11:43:00 AM
Thanks alot Linda-Marie, for kind words on my poem love n blessings from Paul
Date: 8/25/2011 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations Paul on your defining moment poem and win. Joyce
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Date: 8/25/2011 11:45:00 AM
Thanks very much ,Joyce,always appreciated blessings from Paul
Date: 8/25/2011 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations Paul
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Date: 8/25/2011 11:46:00 AM
Cheers Bob appreciated mate
Date: 8/25/2011 9:39:00 AM
hey paul congrats on your win, David
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Date: 8/25/2011 11:47:00 AM
Cheers David always appreciated mate blessings PAUL
Date: 8/24/2011 8:31:00 PM
I can't connect the last verse to the previous ones? I thought I was in Texas or a Mexican border state and then found out I was in Thailand? Maybe one more verse before the last? Or letting us know where we are in verse 1? light & love
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Date: 8/24/2011 1:25:00 PM
I like it, I like it. Where we go changes us. Was the Freddie Mercury tribute you attended with your Skinbob (I like it, I like it) filmed? Would like to have it unless only you have the key. Nola (Perez)
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Date: 8/20/2011 6:27:00 PM
Wonderful wirte Mate, Thailand is a sad place for the poor and needy, I love it......with love....your mate old Jack
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Date: 8/20/2011 6:45:00 PM
CHEERS OLD JACK,I GOT A POEM , NORTH THAILAND,SIMILAR. HOPE ALLS WELL BLESSINGS PAUL
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