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5th Degree Burn

I’m tasting fumes Every word I try to say, burning me up inside I forgot all my chances at the girl-next-door’s house And I waited to call you as the medication wore down Is my heart beating through the phone? So loud, I can’t hear myself think Think for a second, say your piece, I hope it’s metaphorically sound With the just the right amount of hopeless romantic Is my heart beating through the phone? We’re half way through this monologue but I haven’t heard an apology yet You must have started where I left off I must have heard things wrong Oh, and your pitiness has really worn off at this point I’m far from hanging up but my words have just as much passion as I want them to Is my heart beating through the phone? You haven’t said a word in a while Yet I’m far from hanging up Still hanging on, I’m far from hanging up I forgot all my chances at the girl-next-door’s house And I waited to call you as the medication wore down Is my heart beating through the phone? I think it could tell you what I mean without me saying it

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Date: 10/24/2023 7:33:00 AM
This one is very old, from my 6th notebook. I love the flow mixed with the rhyme scheme of this one. This one isn't based on any real life experiences, but just trying to put myself in the shoes of someone who could've experienced this. My Pete Wentz inspiration really comes out here haha this is very early Fall Out Boy esc.
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