5am

rousted from remnants of rest pain paralyzing percolating eye strung up hoping to die 5am cry, not even know why see, what must one even see that they don't already know contours of a delicate face resound amid such elegant grace confirming what is felt and flashed inside the glorious mind beauty beheld beneath edges of time fingertips flush on the outlines of life where bosoms rise then glide in the warmth of a strike from those lips to these no vision, one ever does need the whistle of the chariot awaits legs wrapped hope once blind we dig and we find endorphins exploding, exploring avenues not even tried

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Date: 4/12/2020 5:46:00 PM
Gorgeous imagery here!! Pure poetry.
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Date: 4/12/2020 5:34:00 PM
So many lonely people out there, isolating before isolation. Beautiful poem about longing, lonelieness and love. But you are never alone, O'Schmitty, Easter was and is ALL about LOVE. Love at Easter, Leanne. x
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Date: 4/12/2020 4:35:00 PM
love the imagery and the emotion in this verse, TS. Have a wonderful Happy Easter to you and your family. Hugs Eve
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