Notes About The Poem

5 dates

I had few dates (5) before leaving for college.
- thanks again covid -
so my experience was practically irrelevant.

When it came to love I knew nothing.
I was an unseasoned chicken.

In an argument, I had no social currency,
no litany of my love’s starry predecessors to hype.

In a crunch, I can’t always articulate feelings I’m struggling with -
we’re not all song writers or poets.

What I have is my own brand of cringe rawness -
but breakthrough moments require honesty - don’t they?
Ok, here it is:

You’re not a single song.
You’re a playlist,  a no-skip album
that needs playing at max volume.
Your passions, talents and emotions
make the unmistakable soundtrack of you.
And I love it.
.
.
Songs for this:
Baby Steps by Olivia Dean
sunshine! by Hangsung
Genius (feat. Gush) by C2C
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Conn Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 1:07 AM
You put the ‘big’ in ambiguity and the ‘experience’ in inexperience.
Vionet Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 5:06 AM
And now i'm putting the 'thanks' in 'thank you' =]
Parker Avatar
October 25, 2025 at 11:50 AM
Totally irrelevant: by far the most telling and beautiful photo of Dr. Vionet, the not-poet.
Parker Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 12:21 PM
Smoking smoldering but knowing wink saves the day.
Vionet Avatar
October 25, 2025 at 12:13 PM
Thanks, so, let’s see - your girlfriend is at her most beautiful when she’s glaring at you, right? =]
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