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5417 Head

My son, a whirlwind, a blur of motion, A heart of gold, but lacks all notion Of listening ears, or a mind that obeys, A constant test, in countless ways. He'd scale the moon, if he had the flight, A spirit wild, a mischievous light. But "No!" is a word, he barely comprehends, A stubborn streak, that never ends. NEC's shadow, a constant fear, Made me a softie, throughout the year. No spankings, no harsh, or angry word, Just gentle guidance, softly heard. But patience wears thin, as the years unfold, And "Little 5417 head," a story untold, Escapes my lips, in moments of strife, Reflecting the strain, on this weary life. He'll grow, I know, and learn to see, The value of listening, and empathy. But for now, I cherish the chaos he brings, This whirlwind of energy, that life truly sings.

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Date: 1/21/2025 8:08:00 AM
David, I have never read any of your works before today. You are truly talented. I have six kids and every line of this poem rang true for me. Good luck going forward.
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Date: 1/22/2025 3:31:00 AM
I'm glad u like it and I truly appreciate ur kind words. Thank you

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