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5-7-5

Five seven five For rhyming senyrus I strive Aint no stinking jive by Robb A. Kopp

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/15/2010 1:47:00 PM
I think rhyme adds a nice quality to the haiku and senryu, Robb. To me they read better that way. If this is for the contest, best wishes for sucess. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/15/2010 12:38:00 PM
OK u did all the things Chris did not want but is cool anyway... enjoyed u poking fun at the form and syllable count... but to enter read his rules again luv.. or it will get disqualified ..see his blog..
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Date: 9/15/2010 12:04:00 PM
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