5-7-5

all about nature vivid lines of imagery verb free the hardest

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Christina Bowring

Date: 9/28/2023 11:39:00 PM

This is a very intelligent, interesting Haiku Warren. Well written with carefully chosen words! Thank you for sharing.

Warren Doll
Date: 10/3/2023 6:39:00 AM

Christina, thanks do much for your comments and visit. It's greatly appreciated ~ Warren

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/1/2023 5:54:00 AM

Clever and fun.

Warren Doll
Date: 9/1/2023 1:25:00 PM

Richard, thanks for your comments and visit. Glad that you returned to poetry soup~ Warren.

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/10/2023 4:25:00 AM

Terrific outlay of the ingredients of a haiku! You would know as you certainly have written some great ones, including the one above!! Happy Thursday Warren !!

Warren Doll
Date: 8/10/2023 5:58:00 AM

Hi Mike, great to hear from you. Thank you for your positive comments and visit. Happy Thursday to you too~ Warren

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/3/2023 2:54:00 PM

Wow!! Haiku are not easy for sure even though they seem to be until the writing begins. Thanks for sharing this one with us. If for a contest, reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara

Warren Doll
Date: 8/4/2023 8:25:00 AM

Hi Sara, thanks for your comments and visit. I'm glad that you liked it. Thanks again for the visit. All the best~ Warren.

Tom Woody

Date: 7/29/2023 5:57:00 AM

Ha! Yes and adverbs too.

Warren Doll
Date: 7/29/2023 6:06:00 AM

Hi Tom, thanks for your comment and visit. After our discussion yesterday, I decided to re-write the haiku~ Warren.