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4 Men In a Boat

4 men in a boat, on fateful night . A poet from England ,3 mates set sail , One fell over and met his demise , leaving behind 3 in sadness they returned . To be described in a poem as they wrote .4 men in a boat ..minus one leaves 3. I thought I alone , I was the only one. Maybe. I was wrong . Who tells real truth in poetry I write , like the men in a boat that very sad night. 4 men in a boat , cold and frightened in a storm . At the end of the Day , the end of life , all is happy , all is sad . In love and Pain inspired . Many words written, for life is a storm , in truth and misery . Until the beautiful waters calm , and the seagulls sing their happy song for you. Then you will be writing words of love and happiness . This has been revised from the original version , I am learning new formations by entering contest that are for members on Poetry Soup. this is not about the win , I win every time I try !

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Date: 9/1/2013 2:55:00 PM
Yvette, , congratulations!! awesome "Triolet" ... xox~ LINDA :-)
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Date: 9/1/2013 3:28:00 PM
typo , for
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Date: 9/1/2013 3:27:00 PM
Thank-you , I love this site , I have learned so much just by doing ..I am about ready to sign from membership !! My Poet Destroyer friend ~
Date: 8/26/2013 3:57:00 PM
Interesting work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 8/26/2013 7:24:00 PM
Thank-you Sara , appreciate your following , Love to you and family too , Yvette
Date: 8/26/2013 4:00:00 AM
be free, be as only you can be, be yourself not me, be as you like to be, you me and we! Congrats. Morgan
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Date: 8/26/2013 9:05:00 AM
I love that , What amazing talent is here ! thank-you , warm love all year ;)
Date: 8/25/2013 12:41:00 PM
Well congratulations are in order, a very good look here Yvette -very good! And you're exactly right, the win is absolutely in the effort! Great Job! MC
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Date: 8/25/2013 1:12:00 PM
Thank-you , I love the contest for inspiring me . I am starting to allow my own creativity to inspire There are some amazing artist on here , like your self . I am grateful I found this site .
Date: 8/24/2013 5:48:00 PM
Yvette, congratulations....SKAT
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Date: 8/25/2013 6:49:00 AM
Thanks , I am surprise I have won ! Please note, I have written all from truth and this site has done wonderful Things , starting with " The night Medic " I have been able to write and sadly some dark clouds are following me. I can only ask the "soup " to understand , and allow me to keep writing ! Thank-you Skat , Yvette

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