4 and 20 Pies - No Blackbirds

4 and 20 Pies – No Blackbirds


Oh, spare me the plethora of pies
the thumbs-up plumbs,
the pie in the sky dreams
of the pie lovers,
the onerous moooo
of the piebald cow
being milked
by the pie-eyed farmer
as his pied piper wife
lures the chickens
into a pot pie.
Pie charts to measure
children against nourishment,
who cuts, who chooses,
statistically
who wins, who loses,
 “pies the type”
of apples on the floor.
It ain’t that simple, Simon
say the “pietist”
who fear
that if Pi can’t be squared
pies end is drawing near.


John G. Lawless
10/9/2014

submitted to – Sheri Fresonke Harper
Plentitude of Pies – Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meier-Hans Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 9:34 AM
Great variations of pie John. Congratulations on your win.
Lawless Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 6:07 PM
Thanks Brenda, I've never fully gotten the 4 and 20 blackbirds or the thumb out of the pie.
Mehta Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 8:59 AM
Interesting poem, congrats on the win
Poteet Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 8:01 PM
cute, I like this, congratulations, John.
Lawless Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 6:08 PM
Thanks, I have a lot of fun playing with the wondrous whimsy of words.
Allison Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 2:18 PM
dropping back with my congrats made me smile a second time - great write:-) Hugs jan xxx
Lamoureux Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 12:55 PM
I love inteligent play on words, congrats.
Lawless Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 6:09 PM
Thank you Richard
Harper Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 11:00 AM
John, although you can count, it seems you don't eat quite right, just teasing. Lovely take on a pie poem. Thanks for entering the pie contest, truly wonderful submissions sent in, congratulations on your win.
Lawless Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 6:10 PM
Thank you Sheri for your time and effort in sponsoring the contest.
Callus Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 6:00 PM
Witty and clever take on this pie theme, John! Very enjoyable Hope it does well in the contest. // paul
Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 10:24 PM
Classy way to do that contest!! wish I could be this clever I will probably just do one of those Epulaeryu form poems!! You are a SMART writer.
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 5:09 PM
LOl love the humour here - good luck with the contest. Hugs Jan xxx
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 5:31 PM
:-) my pleasure XX
Lawless Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 5:22 PM
Thanks Jan, your comment means a lot to an old guy with a flaky crust.
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