3 Defenders

Only a house made of bricks stands
No straw or sticks anchor walls
       no undercurrents of menace within
       no spirited chaos, a sin
Brick house tempered by grist, resists

Let the Wolf strut, bluster and boast
       his breath crystallized
       'gainst a brick house that gleams
       frozen terror to those within

No wind to blow his conscience clean
      only discontent, foolish
      that puts the pack on edge

Huff and puff, a stately growl
A brick house defangs rapacious howls
Price of entry, sutured by good deeds

A wolf's high strung dive into a boiling pot
      his darker side inferno
3 little pigs forsake composure, dance
      like a jumpy silent film
But not every wolf melts away

Still, a dwelling menaced stands
      like a magic tale with bricks of truth
      for a glittering house
      liberty's gift
      star shines, 
                    on a hill






Poem composed: February 13, 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 5:58 AM
“Not every wolf melts away”. So wise!
Sambourne Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 9:25 AM
Hi Caren, Unfortunately true. Wolves hang around. Take care. Thank you for taking the time to read my submissions. Brian
Kauffman Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 10:44 AM
Wonderful metaphoric write based in this children's story. Brian. This is very creative. Love the image of the wolf being "defanged." Great use of words. Congrats and kudos for your win!
Sambourne Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 2:26 PM
Hello Sam, I much value your comments. Indeed, there is a subtext component beyond the narrative of this children's story. Thanks again. All the best, Brian
Fowler Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 6:33 AM
Clever Brian. Congratulations on the win! Linda
Sambourne Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 6:54 AM
Greetings Linda, my appreciation for your visit and positive post on my small offering. Be well. All the best, Brian
La France Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 3:35 AM
Sam, congratulations on your win in Anthony's contest with this wonderful Free Verse poem, excellent writing _Constance
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February 19, 2021 at 6:04 AM
Hello Constance Thank you for dropping by with your thumbs up. Much appreciated. Best wishes, Brian
Roper Avatar
February 18, 2021 at 8:59 PM
I like the way you entwined the 3 little pigs and wolf to the verse, Brian, congratulations on your awesome win. Hugs Eve
Sambourne Avatar
February 18, 2021 at 9:08 PM
Thank you, Eve. Kind of you to comment. A friend of mine sees political allusions in the poem. I wonder... Be well. Brian
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