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*Image of Pumpkin Halloween Autumn by Pixabay. 31st Of October Eve Hark, brazen tis starry-eyed moon hath visit yon October night, Dwelt autumn leaves hath slumbereth, for hazel eyes favor, Pivotal moments adrift blesseth assured aims to thine wares, Be humbled forthwith, and shew thy cares, be they knowest, Dwelt autumn leaves hath slumbereth, for hazel eyes favor, Whimsical path brews of small chatter of sought souvenir, Be humbled forthwith, and shew thy cares, be they knowest, Tap at the door, squeaks then echoes, unladen treats for sweets, Whimsical path brews of small chatter of sought souvenir, Pivotal moments adrift blesseth assured aims to thine wares, Tap at the door, squeaks then echoes, unladen treats for sweets, Hark, brazen tis starry-eyed moon hath visit yon October night. 2019 September 30 Poet's Pantoum Cash Prize Poetry Contest Sponsored by: William Kekaula

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/13/2019 6:11:00 AM

Hi, I enjoyed your beautiful poem and example, I have a question. Do you prefer one in old English or do you want it in regular English. ? I will give it a try. Thanks for the sample. . Aloha .

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/13/2019 9:40:00 AM

Either form will be fine, entrants choice ~ Aloha always William

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/2/2019 8:40:00 PM

Well done, loved the old style of English you employed to paint each line. There is extra depth when lines are thus written for they bring a certain flavored intensity to the poems entirety. An impressive Pantoum indeed! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/2/2019 9:23:00 PM

Hope you try for it--THANKS in-kind, Aloha always William

Beata Agustin

Date: 10/2/2019 3:09:00 AM

Thanks for this lovely piece, an excellent example for your contest. God bless you.

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/2/2019 7:50:00 AM

Blessings to you ~ Aloha always William

Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/1/2019 11:46:00 AM

Amazing of course!;)

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/1/2019 12:46:00 PM

Thank you Brenda ~ Aloha always William

Ann Foster

Date: 10/1/2019 10:03:00 AM

Excellent write. Looks like a winner to me. Have the very nicest day. Ann

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/1/2019 12:40:00 PM

My thanks Ann ~ Aloha always William

Jan Allison

Date: 10/1/2019 7:03:00 AM

I what a super example i've written this challenging form and love it, will you accept rhyming for the contest poems too? :-) hugs Jan xx

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/1/2019 12:39:00 PM

Of course Jan and thanks indeed ~ Aloha always William

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/1/2019 1:46:00 AM

I don't think I've ever written a pantoum. I've written terzanelle before. Interesting imagery throughout the poem. Thanks for your visit to my work. Blessings.

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/1/2019 2:12:00 AM

I too am appreciative in-kind, ~ Aloha always William