2d Life

Her heart is stone cold she cannot be loved A wall a defence she's built years to protect Raw emotion nor attraction ever expressed Heart closed to letting inside her chest This wall has withstood the test of time But for what benefit? to strengthen mind? A saviour from feelings she wants to deny Not ever experience what life is like to know Perfect world in her eyes, no tears to be felt All thoughts simply a matter of black and white No colour, no sunshine, no rainbow or smile Just a two dimensional life, day and night The heart unloved is surrounded by steel Long supressed emotions no longer real Stripped and seperated mind and heart How long can one sustain until falling apart This world sealed for her until death thy part

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/27/2014 2:30:00 AM

Hi Shaz... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA

Funom Makama

Date: 6/11/2012 4:32:00 AM

This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 5/23/2012 8:27:00 AM

Wow, this is an awesome write..love it very much..so real and emotionally true...hugs

Stephen Allen

Date: 5/23/2012 7:22:00 AM

Shaz, I know this feeling very well. It is a little ironic, my pen name is "Stoic" and what you so eloquently describe is essentially the Stoic philosophy of controlling emotions and remaining detached.... It can make for a very controllable and predictable life albeit an often cold and lonely one. I think your writing is stunning. -Stephen

Anthony Nutter

Date: 5/23/2012 6:43:00 AM

Love the stone cold heart, you describe it well. A shame people choose to be this way either from life experiences or genetics.

Nikola Žilic

Date: 5/23/2012 5:33:00 AM

I have so many poems that I wrote in my native language with very similar theme. One always sees genius in others if the genius aligns with ones own thoughts I guess :) And I do like this poem :)