2 Breathe U

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** Just to be clear - this poem is about PASSION, not smoking. **

you are sweet incense, filling lungs, coursing through veins, saturating ... ME

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Date: 8/12/2021 8:21:00 AM

lovely ~

Date: 8/12/2021 8:18:00 AM

Sad that an addiction has some people thinking such thoughts. Good way to describe the addiction. Congrats on your winner. Sara

Date: 8/7/2021 11:13:00 AM

Congrats, Greg. Who would ever think it's for smoking anyway?? For me, it's a clearly wonderful metaphor.

Date: 8/7/2021 9:16:00 AM

Wonderful! Congrats!

Date: 8/7/2021 9:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Greg! This is beyond just being romantic. It spills over with the joy and delight of love. Blessings my friend!

Date: 8/7/2021 6:41:00 AM

Wow. Great! Congratulations on your win!

Date: 8/1/2017 5:33:00 PM

this is fantastic monoku, Greg, and thanks for the sweet comment about my poetry. Yours never disappoints either.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/1/2017 8:22:00 PM

Thank you kindly, Andrea ... your comments are always so sweet and heart-felt! <3 :-)

Date: 8/1/2017 3:27:00 PM

Hi Greg, absolutely love this! Just so damn beautiful :)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/1/2017 8:21:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan ... that means a lot to me! Blessings! :-)