25th October 1854 Part 1

The Walk

Roans, chestnuts, blacks and greys
Stand the line in perfect swathes
Tunic buttons and brasses glisten
Brave men sit and for orders listen

The finest horse out on parade
Six hundred men, the Light Brigade
Speedy chargers of sword and lance
This day of glory for taking chance

The bugle sounds, the walk it calls
And to their duty the honour falls
Six hundred men and trusting steed
Start the walk of the cannons greed

The Trot

And into the valley they did enter
A perfect line of regal splendour
That chilling, eerie October day
With death these men would play

The buglers mouth dry, he spits
To make sure the note he hits
The kick of heels and to the trot
Hours of drill and had not forgot

Sabres drawn and lances drooped
Flags unfurled and colours trooped
Spit and polish, a sight they made
Men of steel, the noble Light Brigade

The Charge

Cannon to the front, left and right
To man and horse a fearful sight
Beating hearts and steely nerves
With out a thought, bravely serves

And that final longing bugle call
Charge, God speed one and all
A day that stands long in history
Six hundred men and destiny

Hooves rattled, the pace quickened
Grape shot spat and many smitten
Raglan led as Nolan fell
With the truth his life did sell

Onwards, onwards, brave men rode
The longest mile they ever strode
Flesh ripped and limbs stripped
Shell and shot as fear gripped

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/15/2010 4:08:00 AM
Excellent write with rhyme and rhythm. The description painted a picture for me. Great story. Is this a piece of history? Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 2/12/2010 9:06:00 AM
Wow, Daniel! I can not wait to read Pt. II. I'll reserve my comments 'til then! Peace, Audrey
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