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24 Weeks

An event unexpected, a conception unplanned. A future difficult to hold close until the ultrasound shows ***** ... the wonder of your daughter yet to come. Then on a Sunday when life seems sweet, a trip to the hospital. You reborn into a world of loss and hurt and longing. While we struggle to express our sympathy with words a dozen clichés long for a life no longer viable ... stillborn a little past half way to birth. And I don't even know if she's named.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/9/2011 3:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Kevin. Love Carol
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Date: 11/9/2010 8:23:00 PM
I love the poem. It really makes you feel the upcoming birth
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Date: 11/9/2010 3:38:00 PM
one of the hardest things to bury a child ... i'm sorry if this one caused you distress Doris C
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Date: 11/9/2010 1:46:00 PM
Oh so sad... I have lost a child and it was very hard...
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