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2023 In Three Lines

drained stained glassy soul
broken heart broken curses
denied pot of gold

angstsenryu

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Paula Goldsmith

January 9, 2024 at 9:26 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again. Have a blessed day writing away..................

Karen Jones

January 9, 2024 at 10:24 AM

Thanks Paula!

Andrea Dietrich

January 8, 2024 at 11:33 AM

This one sure said a lot. Sounds like you did not have a great past year. Thanks for participating in my contest and Congrats. Soupmail for you

Karen Jones

January 8, 2024 at 1:27 PM

The year was a rollercoaster ride with ups and downs. Thanks for a challenging contest!

Sara Kendrick

January 4, 2024 at 4:07 AM

Whoa!! Not so sure that 2023 was the best year for you or the person of whom you are writing. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K

Karen Jones

January 4, 2024 at 4:46 AM

Hugs Sara!

Jerry Brotherton

January 3, 2024 at 6:19 PM

A wonderful Senryu Karen.

Karen Jones

January 3, 2024 at 9:33 PM

Thank you again Jerry for reading.

I Am Anaya

January 3, 2024 at 10:49 AM

What a great Senryu, Karen. It sure had an impact on me. Wishing you love and a pot of gold! HNY

Karen Jones

January 3, 2024 at 11:04 AM

Aw thanks may you find the same!

The Situation

January 2, 2024 at 5:25 PM

Wow. The truth hurts.

Karen Jones

January 2, 2024 at 5:47 PM

Hugs The Situation 2024 will be better

Terry Flood

January 2, 2024 at 2:58 PM

I looked at this contest and was totally devoid of ideas. You nailed it, Karen. A smashing write. Best of luck in Andrea’s contest and an amazing 2024 to you. Terry

Karen Jones

January 2, 2024 at 3:23 PM

Aw thanks Terry! Hope your years is awesome!