2023 In Three Lines

drained stained glassy soul
broken heart broken curses
denied pot of gold

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 1/9/2024 9:26:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again. Have a blessed day writing away..................
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/9/2024 10:24:00 AM
Thanks Paula!
Date: 1/8/2024 11:33:00 AM
This one sure said a lot. Sounds like you did not have a great past year. Thanks for participating in my contest and Congrats. Soupmail for you
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/8/2024 1:27:00 PM
The year was a rollercoaster ride with ups and downs. Thanks for a challenging contest!
Date: 1/4/2024 4:07:00 AM
Whoa!! Not so sure that 2023 was the best year for you or the person of whom you are writing. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/4/2024 4:46:00 AM
Hugs Sara!
Date: 1/3/2024 6:19:00 PM
A wonderful Senryu Karen.
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/3/2024 9:33:00 PM
Thank you again Jerry for reading.
Date: 1/3/2024 10:49:00 AM
What a great Senryu, Karen. It sure had an impact on me. Wishing you love and a pot of gold! HNY
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/3/2024 11:04:00 AM
Aw thanks may you find the same!
Date: 1/2/2024 5:25:00 PM
Wow. The truth hurts.
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/2/2024 5:47:00 PM
Hugs The Situation 2024 will be better
Date: 1/2/2024 2:58:00 PM
I looked at this contest and was totally devoid of ideas. You nailed it, Karen. A smashing write. Best of luck in Andrea’s contest and an amazing 2024 to you. Terry
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/2/2024 3:23:00 PM
Aw thanks Terry! Hope your years is awesome!
Date: 1/2/2024 11:37:00 AM
I enjoyed your write. Much said in just 3 lines. Good Luck. Looks like we both did this one... Have a great day writing away..........
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/2/2024 12:34:00 PM
Good luck to you dear I have to look for yours!
Date: 1/2/2024 11:35:00 AM
Nice Senryu, Karen ... I guess you're ready for a great 2024, my friend. Here we go! Bill
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/2/2024 12:33:00 PM
Yes my southern soul brother I am! Thanks
Date: 1/2/2024 11:30:00 AM
very good write Karen hugs Shadow
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/2/2024 12:33:00 PM
Thanks Shadow! Hugs
Date: 1/2/2024 10:53:00 AM
Nicely done Karen.. hope you find that pot of gold..
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/2/2024 12:32:00 PM
Thanks Silent One I sure could use it!
Date: 1/2/2024 8:09:00 AM
You summed it up well Karen, hope 2024 is the opposite for you. Tom
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/2/2024 8:18:00 AM
Thanks Tom!
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