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Twenty-twenty on his deathbed lies. Most saw him with disapproving eyes. Some prospered as they watched him grow. But many looked at him as a son of woe. Though no wars did he bring - his praises we shall surely never sing. In our minds has grown an embryo – our hopes now pinned on him. This unborn child – will his youth be sweet or grim? Will we be proud to watch him grow? One can never know! Oh, Twenty-twenty-one, in your brother’s footsteps please don't follow. Dec. 30, 2021

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Date: 1/28/2021 6:54:00 AM
Andrea, The years hold a special memory, each one a little different. -Richard
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Date: 1/25/2021 4:03:00 AM
So lovely dear Andrea! Certainly a fave!!
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Date: 1/20/2021 6:50:00 AM
Clever write and wonderfully penned - loved the egg-timer style as time passes on - congratulations on POTW. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 1/8/2021 10:15:00 AM
Nice job! I loved the hourglass look that ensued. You are SO talented, Andreal. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/6/2021 3:33:00 PM
Amen Andrea! Wonderfully spoken and delightfully crafted into an hour glass. I think you speak for all of us. I love the metaphoric use of Father Time and the newborn. Best wishes for the new year and the contest!
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Date: 1/6/2021 12:02:00 AM
How wonderful to receive POTW in the first week of 2021! That may be taken as a good omen of the better things to come in this new year my friend! Congratulations on your wonderful double Etheree being honored Andrea. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/5/2021 5:45:00 PM
Wonderful... Congrats on POTW. God bless you always
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Date: 1/5/2021 1:42:00 AM
Andrea, awesome write and a big congratulations on your double win in the contest and POEM OF THE WEEK, wonderful _Constance
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Date: 1/4/2021 9:49:00 AM
Like the form this has taken Andrea. Yes do not follow in your brothers footsteps. Awesome my friend. love phyl
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Date: 1/4/2021 7:36:00 AM
This is awesome, but then you’ve always been great at this form. Amazing work and congratulations on potw... happy new year
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Date: 1/4/2021 6:55:00 AM
So well expressed Andrea! Congrats on POTW!
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Date: 1/3/2021 7:09:00 PM
"Oh, Twenty-twenty-one, in your brother’s footsteps please don't follow" Sadly, nothing has changed. We are still in a Pandemic and life isn't normal. I am taking each day- one step at a time. Things will get better. Many blessings await - in 2021. Congratulations Andrea, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 1/3/2021 2:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Deep and a wonderful write. Enjoy your win. Today, have joy/blessings
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Date: 1/3/2021 12:00:00 PM
Wonderful writing and a hopeful message. Great choice for first POTW of 2021, my friend, congratulations for the honor ~ John
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Date: 1/3/2021 6:25:00 AM
Back with congrats Andrea on POTW.
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Date: 1/3/2021 6:22:00 AM
Congratulations on POTW Andrea, let's hope 2021 is a better year!
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Date: 1/3/2021 4:47:00 AM
Another POTW Andrea, big congratulations. Tom
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Date: 1/3/2021 3:05:00 AM
many congrats on your win and on a very fitting POTW:-) many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/3/2021 1:45:00 AM
So true. A wonderful and wonderous wonder you've written. Enchanting. God B L E S S you and Congrats on your number one win
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Date: 1/3/2021 12:12:00 AM
Beautifully written! Happy I came across this :)
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Date: 1/2/2021 6:59:00 PM
This is a Superb way of describing it.....Congrats on a Top Win dear Andrea...hugs :)
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Date: 1/2/2021 6:47:00 PM
I'm so happy to see this one draw a #1 finish. I had a good feeling about it. Fav! Congratulations and happy new year, dear friend ~ John
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Date: 1/2/2021 4:11:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations for your placement in my contest. Warm wishes for a happy, healthy, peaceful New Year 2021. Best. Mohan.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/2/2021 6:41:00 PM
thanks so very much, Mohan, for this wonderful placement in your contest.
Date: 1/1/2021 2:17:00 PM
Andrea, I agree with all the comments, this is an incredible poem for a challenging year for so many. Fine context and meter and all in a very fine shape. Your talent was put to very good use in this write. Happy New Year Andrea, -Richard
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Date: 1/1/2021 4:16:00 AM
A realistic approach to new life, Andrea!! A wonderfully write for the contest!!
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