Get Your Premium Membership

2009

As we bid farewell to 2008 I reminisce about all the good days All the sweets that we ate All the good friends that we bade Goodbye to in the past year And gear up to face the exams that come near. This is my 16th new year And this one is very dear As I'll almost be of age The next time this day comes along This is last I can spend With my present friends As I move in March 2009 Hoping I will be fine In a new place I know nothing about And I say good-bye devout To all the memories of 2008 The fun we had the friends we made **I'm not sure of the usage of the word devout as I am using it for the first time. Please let me know if it's right else I'll change it to some other word. I'd used it to rhyme with 'about' by the way. ~Aakanksha

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/31/2015 9:39:00 PM
A S, enjoyed reading your tonight. Hope to see you active this coming year. Goodbye, 2015 --- Hello 2016. God Bless. SKAT
Login to Reply
Date: 1/6/2009 9:00:00 AM
HEL and like mama use to say about the past, another year of lessons gone and swept under the rug. This was a powerful write and i really enjoyed reading it.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/2/2009 4:25:00 AM
any doubts, you can ask ME any time. will help u in whatever possible way I can... :)
Login to Reply
Date: 1/2/2009 4:24:00 AM
hey wow! it is amazing...
Login to Reply
Date: 1/1/2009 9:01:00 PM
Young one, blessings to you on your journey. Yes, it is good to take the wonderful memories of 2008 and enjoy them. I'm not sure what you are trying to convey with the word devote in this poem but it doesn't seem quite right to say good-bye to it. Keep on writing. I wish you a wonderful New Year! Karen
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs