Ronald A. Williams Poet Imagism

1st Heaven

Powdery white, puffy cotton candy mountain clouds. 
Blue watery blue skies a mile high. 
Birds dancing by.
Sun sparkling, glistening beaming bright.
Sun illuminating, giving radiant light.
I'm having an experiential feeling;
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Line Gauthier January 12, 2018 at 2:57 PM What a delightfully delicious poem. I feel like I've just eaten a treat. Thank you for sharing, Ronald. Ronald A. Williams April 10, 2018 at 7:44 PM Did a touch up with the poem. I hope that it is more touching now. Amen, Blessings. Ronald A. Williams January 17, 2018 at 6:48 PM Take another look, now perfected. Amen Ronald A. Williams January 12, 2018 at 5:05 PM Thank you Line, I am glad that you were blessed.

Shawna Horsley January 7, 2018 at 11:18 PM Very beautifully written. short and sweet. Ronald A. Williams April 10, 2018 at 7:43 PM Did a touch up with the poem. I hope that it is more touching now. Amen, Blessings. Ronald A. Williams January 17, 2018 at 6:48 PM Take another look, now perfected. Amen Ronald A. Williams January 12, 2018 at 5:04 PM Thanks Shwana for your nice comment.

Gayle Rodd January 7, 2018 at 9:12 AM Delightful! Ronald A. Williams April 10, 2018 at 7:43 PM Did a touch up with the poem. I hope that it is more touching now. Amen, Blessings. Ronald A. Williams January 17, 2018 at 6:47 PM Take another look, now perfected. Amen Ronald A. Williams January 7, 2018 at 8:07 PM Take another look. This is what the poem should fully be. Amen Ronald A. Williams January 7, 2018 at 9:50 AM Thanks Gayle, I certainly agree. I am glad you were delighted with it. Amen

Thvia Shetley September 11, 2017 at 11:29 AM Short, sweet and to the point. They say that less is more and you illustrated that quite nicely in this piece. Well done x Ronald A. Williams April 10, 2018 at 7:43 PM Did a touch up with the poem. I hope that it is more touching now. Amen, Blessings. Ronald A. Williams January 17, 2018 at 6:47 PM Take another look, now perfected. Amen Ronald A. Williams January 7, 2018 at 8:07 PM Take another look. This is what the poem should fully be. Amen Ronald A. Williams November 25, 2017 at 7:26 PM Thanks Thvia, you are very much right and truthful. Sorry I did not get back to you sooner. Stay blessed. Amen