1st Heaven

Powdery white, puffy cotton candy mountain clouds. 
Blue watery blue skies a mile high. 
Birds dancing by.
Sun sparkling, glistening beaming bright. 
Luminous radiant light shining.
That is what the first heaven is like!

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Date: 1/12/2018 2:57:00 PM
What a delightfully delicious poem. I feel like I've just eaten a treat. Thank you for sharing, Ronald.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 1/12/2018 5:05:00 PM
Thank you Line, I am glad that you were blessed.
Date: 1/7/2018 11:18:00 PM
Very beautifully written. short and sweet.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 1/12/2018 5:04:00 PM
Thanks Shwana for your nice comment.
Date: 1/7/2018 9:12:00 AM
Delightful!
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 1/7/2018 8:07:00 PM
Take another look. This is what the poem should fully be. Amen
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 1/7/2018 9:50:00 AM
Thanks Gayle, I certainly agree. I am glad you were delighted with it. Amen
Date: 9/11/2017 11:29:00 AM
Short, sweet and to the point. They say that less is more and you illustrated that quite nicely in this piece. Well done x
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Date: 1/7/2018 8:07:00 PM
Take another look. This is what the poem should fully be. Amen
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 11/25/2017 7:26:00 PM
Thanks Thvia, you are very much right and truthful. Sorry I did not get back to you sooner. Stay blessed. Amen