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1st Heaven

Powdery white, puffy cotton candy mountain clouds. Blue watery blue skies a mile high. Birds dancing by. Sun sparkling, glistening beaming bright. Sun illuminating, giving radiant light. I'm having an experiential feeling; 1st Heaven like!

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Line Gauthier

Date: 1/12/2018 2:57:00 PM

What a delightfully delicious poem. I feel like I've just eaten a treat. Thank you for sharing, Ronald.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 4/10/2018 7:44:00 PM

Did a touch up with the poem. I hope that it is more touching now. Amen, Blessings.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 1/17/2018 6:48:00 PM

Take another look, now perfected. Amen

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 1/12/2018 5:05:00 PM

Thank you Line, I am glad that you were blessed.

Shawna Horsley

Date: 1/7/2018 11:18:00 PM

Very beautifully written. short and sweet.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 4/10/2018 7:43:00 PM

Did a touch up with the poem. I hope that it is more touching now. Amen, Blessings.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 1/17/2018 6:48:00 PM

Take another look, now perfected. Amen

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 1/12/2018 5:04:00 PM

Thanks Shwana for your nice comment.

Gayle Rodd

Date: 1/7/2018 9:12:00 AM

Delightful!

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 4/10/2018 7:43:00 PM

Did a touch up with the poem. I hope that it is more touching now. Amen, Blessings.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 1/17/2018 6:47:00 PM

Take another look, now perfected. Amen

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 1/7/2018 8:07:00 PM

Take another look. This is what the poem should fully be. Amen

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 1/7/2018 9:50:00 AM

Thanks Gayle, I certainly agree. I am glad you were delighted with it. Amen

Thvia Shetley

Date: 9/11/2017 11:29:00 AM

Short, sweet and to the point. They say that less is more and you illustrated that quite nicely in this piece. Well done x

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 4/10/2018 7:43:00 PM

Did a touch up with the poem. I hope that it is more touching now. Amen, Blessings.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 1/17/2018 6:47:00 PM

Take another look, now perfected. Amen

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 1/7/2018 8:07:00 PM

Take another look. This is what the poem should fully be. Amen

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 11/25/2017 7:26:00 PM

Thanks Thvia, you are very much right and truthful. Sorry I did not get back to you sooner. Stay blessed. Amen