1 hit

My mom looks at me like I’m nothing 
All cuz of 1 hit
My dad thinks I’m a failure 
All cuz of 1 hit
My personality changed
All cuz of 1 hit
I spend all my money
All cuz of 1 hit
I can’t stop myself
All cuz of 1 hit 
I want to stop but cant
All cuz of 1 hit 
I ruined my life 
All cuz of 1 hit
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May 13, 2026 at 11:26 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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