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1-7-10 Kissing the Pain

Will you forever be the wind, that carries my rain? i miss you, softly calling my name i wish sometimes that you could be mine again brushing my skin through our dreams softly kissing my lips, fading my screams eyes to bore into eyes i saw you and knew my heart to be alive i felt you each time we spoke my heart, my love, seemed to grow place a stake within my soul let it bleeds as the thorns grow ripping fervently into my flesh as im bleeding softly to death forever ill remember you, as my wind forever ill be in my heart, your rain softly kissing goodbye your pain

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Date: 2/18/2010 8:40:00 AM
wow rain this is a wonderfully beautiful poem! this is going into my favs now! i loved it, it reminded me of Paul and me. i mean wow the metaphors the imagery the raw feeling i felt wow almost speachless here!this was perfect and i cant even think of a favorite part because i loved the whole thing!=)Jo
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Date: 1/8/2010 10:45:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Rain. May your writing take you to new heights each and every day. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/7/2010 11:20:00 AM
Wow i will definitely write with you, just let me know when.
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