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1980s childhood

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Being new to the poetry scene, and self educating, I'm unsure of the content of these poems are correctly labeled Haiku. But, in art, creativity and content are unique and individual I believe. I hope this isn't so far off the mark though.

1980s childhood Haikus Tech-free Nature's performing Batteries not included childhood playground My bike Pink banana seat A basket full of daisies Warm wind on my face Saturdays Cartoons and breakfast The sky our only roof top Street lights call us home

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Tom Woody

Date: 4/22/2024 9:21:00 AM

Hi Crystol. One easy way to differentiate between haiku and senryu is haiku must be about nature, or in a nature scene. They're probably all three senryus, though #2 may be considered haiku. Hey, we're all learners here! Nice job

Crystol Woods
Date: 4/23/2024 1:49:00 AM

Oh thank you so much Tom! I'll remember that from now on...I appreciate the gift of Knowledge!:)