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It's been just over seven months since I fell off the roof I'd never believed in miracles, but they happen I'm proof Apart from a limp when walking I was feeling quite well And that I'd suffered a horrific injury you just couldn't tell. Life returned to normal, and my physio was pleased with me She said, "It can take years to recover from a brain injury But you've somehow managed to overcome all adversities I'm more than happy to discharge you and your doctor agrees".  I'd also been placed under the care of a top psychiatrist And for some unknown reason they had kept me on his list I didn't pay it much heed, but my wife thought it was strange I said jokingly "Maybe they don't want me to get out of range". But strange it certainly was when we got home about four Three men in dark suits were waiting at our front door "Can I help you?” I said "And who is it you want to see? " One said "We're from the CIA paranormal section at Langley”. I said" Well you'd better come in and tell me what this is all about" I thought this isn't going to end very well, of that I’d no doubt They said that they'd like me to return, a man needs assassinating An evil man called Jen An Salah whom mankind needs terminating. I couldn’t help but laugh and said "Well, who the hell is he?" John who seemed to be in charge explained it all to me "He is long believed to be the father of terrorism worldwide And because of his twisted ideology, thousands have died". "Just one big problem" I said, "I banged my head, and I fell I had a strange experience, was it a dream? no one can tell" John said "Your blood tests showed traces of the virus sera That could have only come from someone in the Victorian era". I said "Wow, you’ve certainly done a thorough research on me And if you don't mind me saying this but it's all pure fantasy Another problem you might have overlooked that I can foresee Is how I could get back there and that's assuming I agree”. John added "We can trick the front part of your brain Telling it that you've fallen from a height; you'd feel no pain A laser fires tiny electrodes and pulses in quick succession And for the good of mankind, I hope you undertake the mission”. He added" We'll leave you now but please think it through Talk it through with your wife and decide if this mission you'll do" They left and I said to my wife “Let’s discuss what’s been said It seems like it's not just me that's had a knock to the head". I googled Jen An Salah and it was just as John had said That because of his twisted ideologies thousands were dead My wife looked at me and said "Pete, I won't tell you what to do But wherever decision you make then I'll fully support you". I lay in bed tossing and turning all throughout the night And thought Salah was garbage and to kill him would be right I'd been in the Afghanistan war, and I'd killed quite a few But assassinating someone to me was something quite new. I phoned John the next day and told him I'd made my decision And said " Yes John, I'm in and more than ready for this mission” " Okay " said John" Someone is on their way to pick you up But as I said yesterday, you'll be on your own without any backup". I was taken to Langley and John was at the front waiting for me Then he took me into a private room and told me all the history Salah had visited England in 1856 and broke his leg in a fall And was taken for treatment in London at Saint Jude's hospital. "Wow" I said" That's where I worked on a Monday and Friday” Then noticed he had my psychiatrist's notes, so he knew what to say He said "You'll hear of his arrival then make plans to see it through You won't be under any suspicion as everyone there respects you”. Then I said" If I fail and don't manage to get back home to my wife I want an iron guarantee she'll want for nothing for the rest of her life" John said "I'll transfer a hundred thousand dollars into her account I'm sure you'll agree that it is a very life changing amount". Written 29th October 2024 CONTINUES IN PART TWO

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Date: 11/7/2024 1:54:00 PM
Hi Tom i see 1856 has become a literary seam Of dreams and tense scenes.' I shall read part Two, all my best to you.'
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Date: 11/7/2024 2:48:00 PM
Thank you very much Joe, longest one I've ever written. Tom
Date: 11/5/2024 2:23:00 PM
Gom, hi. I find this quite remarkable.. I was thinking Star Trek in my mind as I was reading it.)) because I know you’re a tricky fan.. You have an extraordinary imagination and the ability to write it. And keep me engaged I can tell you honestly long poems bore re me, because I have a very short attention span. Helena would agree. I wish I had your skills, but I don’t.. I’m making this a FAV today! And read part two tonight or tomorrow. Thank you for giving me a heads up on this one.. Pangie
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Date: 11/5/2024 8:13:00 PM
Thank you very much Pangie, I know many prefer shorter poems, I start writing and forget to stop sometimes lol. Tom
Date: 10/31/2024 11:46:00 PM
Tom sorry for not coming by earlier to see this gripping and tense story line of you working for the CIA. My personal research on the alphabet agencies has brought me there through your rhyme. Your creative thinking is impressive my friend and now I am off to part 2. Thank you for sharing Tom...
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Date: 10/31/2024 11:52:00 PM
Thank you very much Michael, I tried to put it all on one page but a message flashed up, please revise, poem too long. A bit of Star Trek, Terminator and my wild imagination inspired this one.. Tom
Date: 10/31/2024 1:02:00 PM
Tom, I'm about to read part two...but I can say that this has all the suspense and intrigue of a Hitchcock film. One of the networks was showing "psycho" which I had never seen before and that film also involves psychiatry. You might have a great future as a screenwriter in Hollywood!!!
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Date: 10/31/2024 2:21:00 PM
Thank you very much Duke, well it's been a few days and no ones called me, maybe I was out when they rang lol. I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 10/31/2024 8:36:00 AM
A fantastic tale with a LIFE CHANGING AMOUNT IN ONES ACCOUNT - is awesome - your story telling exhilarating as always Tom. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/31/2024 8:40:00 AM
Thank you very much Jennifer, glad you enjoyed it, had to make two poems out of it as it was too long... / Tom
Date: 10/31/2024 4:01:00 AM
Tom, this is fascinating and I am looking forward to part two!!
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Date: 10/31/2024 5:50:00 AM
Thank you very much Mike, I'm happy you are enjoying it. Shame I couldn't get it all on the one page. Tom
Date: 10/30/2024 10:31:00 PM
I wondered if I had read your captivating story before Tom, and got my answer from your comment below. So on to part 2 . Hugs
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Date: 10/30/2024 10:51:00 PM
Thank you very much Maria, I was looking for inspiration and remembered John Gondolf saying it begged a sequel. Tom
Date: 10/30/2024 2:33:00 PM
A sci fi touch with time travel too, Very nicely told Tom
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Date: 10/30/2024 2:41:00 PM
Thank you very much Joseph I'm happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 10/30/2024 7:02:00 AM
Again, I'll give you the title Master Storyteller. Enthralling plot well told in a rhyming poem. I'm off now to read Part II! Janice
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Date: 10/30/2024 7:59:00 AM
Thank you very much Janice, I'm glad it, I wrote 1856 a few months ago and John Gondolf said it begged a sequel, I finally got round to it. Tom
Date: 10/29/2024 10:05:00 PM
I wonder if I have read this before... or is it a new story? You are so good at making up stories and many plots are up your sleeve. I feel, assassinating a man whatever be the reason doesn't suit to your gentlemanly disposition. I am eager to read the remaining part. I shall do it when I get time.
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Date: 10/29/2024 11:32:00 PM
Thank you very much Valsa, I wrote 1856 a few months ago and someone suggested a follow up. Longest poem I've ever written, 31 stanzas, I just kept going, pure fantasy of course, I'd never hurt a fly. Tom
Date: 10/29/2024 5:01:00 PM
Tom, a great and captivating story, well done.
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Date: 10/29/2024 9:33:00 PM
Thank you very much Tania, the longest poem I've ever written, tried to post it and red warning, poem too long lol. Tom
Date: 10/29/2024 3:44:00 PM
Great story! I was gripped from the start! Another fave for me! Well done Tom:-)
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Date: 10/29/2024 4:02:00 PM
Thank you very much Lisa, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Thanks for faving it. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Date: 10/29/2024 3:05:00 PM
Wow, a fascinating story, Tom, as for the next part, bring it on… Beryl
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Date: 10/29/2024 3:10:00 PM
Thanks Beryl, had to make two poems, they said it was too big. Tom

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