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17 Sexy Syllables

you are my moon, babe i'm surrendering my tide over and over

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Date: 6/25/2016 11:36:00 PM
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Date: 5/25/2013 10:53:00 AM
Hi Mina, congratulations with your haiku win. , your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"
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Date: 5/20/2013 2:41:00 PM
wowowow, this one is CLEVER. Congrats.
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Date: 5/20/2013 11:16:00 AM
Congrats on your fine win. AO
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Date: 5/11/2013 9:22:00 AM
Hi Mina, i love the sexy syllables.. wow wow... We need to have new haiku contest around here. If you ever see a new one from me, please take the time in entering this poem in any haiku contest I host in the future. Thank you for the lovely passion in someones eye, Enjoy the greatest people and things in life. Have yourself a wonderful and lovely Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *LINDA
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