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17 Is the Lucky Number

idyllic fake smile, an empath death holds a supine body twisted in the folds lamenting memories seep through the pain where incidental weakness falls like rain ten fold the weeping willow tree's own bane veneration seeps with crimson tinged night as her aura blends with the fading light july 15, 2019

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Jude Herrick

Date: 9/13/2019 11:47:00 PM

Awesome poem! I especially enjoyed the last line.

Chris Green

Date: 8/22/2019 3:48:00 PM

It appears I missed a lot while I was away. It seems congrats are in order but this poem was a winner in my eyes regardless of any contest. Wonderfully written.

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/22/2019 4:10:00 PM

Thank you Chris... this was a tough contest...we only had so many lines to fit the given words, rhyme is more difficult for me to begin with, but sometimes i like to challenge my muse :) hugs

Ralph Sergi

Date: 8/17/2019 8:25:00 AM

A poem worthy of a first place. Congratulations, Sandra!

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/17/2019 8:38:00 AM

Thank you Ralph :) hugs

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/8/2019 11:47:00 PM

Wow! I don't think this could have been written any better Sandra! You used these necessary words like a virtuoso plays his Stradivarius! I am impressed enough with this poem to put it straight into my Faves! Congratulations on your deserving First Place win! : ) xxoo

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/9/2019 7:39:00 AM

Thank you Connie. This was a tough challenge and I was happy with the way it turned out :) hugs

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/5/2019 8:49:00 AM

where incidental weakness falls like rain...what a beautiful line. Congrats on your beautiful win.

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/9/2019 7:38:00 AM

Thank you Jeanne :) hugs

Lu Loo

Date: 8/4/2019 2:50:00 PM

great poem, loved it...thank you for your participation and congratulations on your win. :)-luloo

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/4/2019 3:14:00 PM

Thank you for hosting the contest and finding my poem worthy of a win....it was a good contest, one that made the writer think within the box....sometimes good challenges like this ink some great poems! :) hugs

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/19/2019 1:46:00 PM

HI sandra, an excellent write and a very good contender for the contest - well penned - holding thumbs, an aroma of win win win in the air! Hugs, Jennifer.

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/28/2019 6:36:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer, i believe since my write Lu Loo changed the rules slightly but i liked the way this turned out so didn't attempt to change it :) hugs

John Gondolf

Date: 7/16/2019 8:29:00 AM

Nicely done, Sandy. I really struggled with the constraints of this contest and finally decided to pass. Best of luck my friend. John

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/16/2019 8:39:00 AM

Thanks John it was definitely one of the hardest contests but my muse likes to be challenged so I gave it a whirl. Hugs :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/15/2019 2:43:00 PM

Sandra, you did a great job. I thought to myself "hey, these words sound familiar." Then I remembered this word list. Not easy to do in such a limited line count. I had trouble eliminating until I went from 8 to 7 lines. Good luck in the contest!

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/15/2019 9:23:00 PM

Thank you Caren, I agree it was tough, I set out to attempt it the other day and got a great sonnet out of it today my muse was on the same page with me :) hugs

John Hamilton

Date: 7/15/2019 12:23:00 PM

Great word selection, as always a great red from you!

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/15/2019 12:56:00 PM

Thank you John, this was a very challenging write to use all the words in 7 lines of 10 syllables that rhymes :) hugs