Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

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Tenderness exudes from him as he takes the hand

Of the woman, sick and frail; he’s a gifted man.

Uncommonly calm, he utters, “God has a plan.”

Consoling her, he is guided to soothe her soul and

Heal her body, for God’s spirit tells him he can.

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Dale Gregory Cozart January 27, 2018 at 11:19 AM Rereading. I still feel so uplifted by your final line.

Line Gauthier August 14, 2017 at 10:42 AM Awesome. Powerful. Thanks for sharing your talent.

Debbie Duncan August 11, 2017 at 8:19 PM I like this :) I do believe touch can heal as well as hurt. Ok, I finally posted " Just A Little Humor", I wasn't sure I liked it. :)

Jack Horne July 27, 2017 at 11:57 AM i knew someone who went to a faith healer, once. love this clever write - hope it's a big winner, my friend

Jannie Breedt July 10, 2017 at 12:07 AM Gee Andrea, this SO fits in with my belief.the brevity of this piece makes it "holy" . This is what sets you apart from many others. This is real art.

Gregory Richard Barden July 7, 2017 at 8:14 PM Wonderful acrostic, my friend - I'm glad this made the winner's list, (though I would have placed it higher) ... mine did not make the list at all. This is being fav-ed. Andrea Dietrich July 18, 2017 at 4:00 PM I thank you for this kind remark, Greg!

Daniel Turner July 7, 2017 at 6:13 PM Congratulations Andrea on your win. Emotive acrostic:)

Eve Roper July 7, 2017 at 4:52 PM Back to congratulate you !!!!~*

Jan Allison July 7, 2017 at 2:16 PM Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May July 7, 2017 at 10:58 AM Congrats on your win Andrea

Robert Lindley July 7, 2017 at 9:48 AM WONDERFUL AND MOST INSPIRING VERSES MY FRIEND. I knew such would be the case even before reading this fantastic entry. Congrats on your win.

Sharon Gulley July 7, 2017 at 9:05 AM This is a beautifully written acrostic Andrea, Thank you so much for entering the contest. A true pleasure to read. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. : )

James Inman July 3, 2017 at 10:39 AM Mission accomplished here Andrea, it certainly touched me.

Afzal Nusker June 30, 2017 at 11:06 AM Nostalgic and beautiful!!!

Connie Marcum Wong June 29, 2017 at 10:06 PM Wow Andrea! This is such a tender beautiful write. It inspired me! : )

Demetrios Trifiatis June 29, 2017 at 5:53 PM Heavenly writing dear, Andrea! Certainly deserves to be Fav by me anyway! Good luck my dear friend!

Vladislav Raven June 29, 2017 at 9:37 AM Hi Andrea, i hope this write does well in the contest. I think it should do. Such a touching write with calmly emotional undertones. I do love the content of this one Andrea, May your pen ever run gold. This write touches deeply. It has to be a fave. Hugs....Mike. XX

Jean Murray June 29, 2017 at 5:49 AM How well this conveys the calling of those men of the cloth Andrea. Just beautiful.

John Hardison June 28, 2017 at 9:21 PM Comforting! acrostic. Peace, Love and Joy.

John Hamilton June 28, 2017 at 2:18 PM So uplifting Andrea, hopeful and positive, this WILL do well I'm sure!

Chris Green June 28, 2017 at 11:02 AM This is beautiful Andrea...add another amazing poem to the contest list. Sharon is going to have a difficult time judging this one, I'm glad it's not me.

Frederic Parker June 28, 2017 at 10:10 AM I'm not a lover of acrostics, but this is a well written touching poem...good luck

Daniel Turner June 28, 2017 at 9:00 AM a touching acrostic, Andrea. Good luck!

Joseph May June 28, 2017 at 7:31 AM Tender and touching Andrea..best wishes

Viv Wigley June 27, 2017 at 11:30 PM Amen to that, Andrea, nicely done. Good luck in the comp, Viv x

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