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They came disguised as angels to one He had forgave 
To make him fall unfaithful and drag him to the grave 
He did not drink the water in Hell the night before 
Would not deny the Father and bravely fought that war 
Had seen the fiery ocean and kissed the lame man’s feet 
Held tight the weeping woman and watched the demons eat 
A man with pitch-black eyes said, “they love the world they’re in.” 
“They believe the ancient lie and you will never win.” 
He then became a cobra with two heads in the sand 
“Forsake the name Jehovah or never leave my land.” 
With God’s Word the serpent fell he’s said to say, “Not here.” 
With the Lord departed Hell without defeat or fear. 
Safely in the living world believing all was won 
Shared this with a kindred soul but Satan was not done 
Something strong was drawing near sons sleeping in their beds 
“If I fight this battle here by morning I’ll be dead.” 
When all was calm they came back pretending to be friends 
Offered gifting for attack to be God’s champion 
“Lay on back and let us work. We will anoint you now…” 
“Do not fear, it will not hurt, before you we all bow.” 
It was pleasure uncompared, sensations, oh so great! 
Demons had him in their snare and now it was too late. 
Frantically, he tried to stand they pulled him toward the ground 
Pulled them off with their bare hands but could not keep them down 
Fervent prayers in Jesus’ name to bind their hands and feet 
Laughing, dragging, their own chains they pawed defenseless meat 
Answered prayer, the Lord was there He said, “No drop of blood” 
“Anything but death is fair, He’ll praise me, drought or flood” 
Morning would be coming soon then surely they’d be gone 
Struggling in the light of moon he longed to see the dawn 
Then there was no fight inside I said, “Your will be done.” 
Closed my eyes as if to hide I could no longer run 

Thank you God, I’m still alive You did not let them win! 
Praise the Lord Oh God on High! My Abba, Maker, Friend.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/7/2012 1:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "Holding out for a Hero" contest Shane. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/7/2012 11:56:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Shane. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/6/2012 8:41:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Shane. Excellent piece. great job. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 5/5/2012 9:08:00 PM
Very well written Shane. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/5/2012 6:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your very different type of hero poem and placement. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/2/2012 2:58:00 PM
Wonderful first poem, great first impression, you are so talented! Welcome to Poetry Soup, I hope you love it as much as I have come to! Love, J.
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Date: 5/2/2012 1:00:00 PM
Lovely written poem Shane. - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will write, read and comments back alot of poem here. - Hello and love from Norway and Anne-Lise
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