12 Painful Steps

12 Painful Steps



Twelve,
Painful,
Steps to take.
Day after day,
One day at a time.
Each small step brings you peace,
A feeling that had been lost.
This peace fuels you for the next step.
This journey will be extremely hard,
But you are strong, ready. Take that first step.


Written by: S.Ronthorpe
© 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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May 26, 2013 at 8:38 PM
Samual, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. Have yourself a beautiful Memorial Day, this Monday. God bless the ones who fought and keep on fighting. Always~ LINDA
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March 4, 2012 at 10:05 PM
Congrats on your win with this great write...well-written and encouraging for anyone who needs to take that first step. Blessings, Rhonda
K. Avatar
March 3, 2012 at 11:37 AM
Sometimes, all we need is that first step and it could be the start of something great... painful but well worth it-- really like this empowering write, Samual! and I see that congrats are in order, yay for you! Thank you so much for dropping by my poems with your encouraging words :D
Brown Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 6:02 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "UPTO SIXTEEN" contest Samuel. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 8:33 PM
congrats on winning an HM Samual for this extra special wise advice of a write luv.. twelce is a lucky digit for me personally and these steps can only lead to peace and joy as written luv..
Pettit Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 8:24 PM
Your poem might be good to advertise Joint Juice. I can picture myself taking those twelve painful steps to the front door of my house while I read your work. Very descriptive.
Dietrich Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 7:40 PM
So have you had to take those steps, or is this just writing from what you have heard? I hope it's not been your experience, but I think a person who has gone thru the process successfully has to be a very strong person.
Kendrick Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 5:55 PM
Good advice..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
Taylor Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 4:44 PM
Congrats, Sam. Excellent write. Great job. Nice going, my friend. Best to you and yours. Ralph
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 10:31 AM
Just taking step one of a new challenge xx
Prabhu Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 1:34 AM
them 12 but still need to be taken,gr8 one~sashi
A   Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 10:25 PM
samual, lots of step...even if it's 12... still i take them everyday...enjoyed..pd
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