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'128 Words' - Spring

SPRING ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Small spring bird sings. Blooms wait, rain pings. The rush to grow. The threat of snow. Spring hides new life, waits for the strife, of snow and frost, it knows the cost. Burnt leaves, ice found, still on the ground. Spring is no fool, bides by each rule. Waits for the sun, still hid no fun. One more month, cold! Might just get bold? But it's learnt well, to cold, to tell new life, come out while cold has clout. Yet still, birds sing, in hope that spring, gets it just right, no need to fight. Warmth of the sun. Cold on the run. Jack frost packs up. Spring has a look. Yep cold has gone, birds in full song. Spring once more rules. The cold, downed tools. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
01/31/18 Entered the '128 words' Poetry Contest sponsored by Silent One

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Date: 2/15/2018 10:37:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in this VERY challenging form, Mick - blessings and congrats to you, my friend! :-)
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Date: 2/8/2018 6:01:00 PM
Beautiful imagery flows wonderfully through your poem Mick. Fantastic content in your smooth write as well. Congratulations on your fine win! Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Mick Talbot
Date: 2/9/2018 5:34:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words Susan, appreciated... best wishes... Mick
Date: 2/5/2018 2:25:00 AM
I was.. some great poems..I went for flow and rhymes im regards to placements..
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Mick Talbot
Date: 2/5/2018 6:42:00 AM
You did a grand job, thanks, Silent!,
Date: 2/4/2018 7:39:00 PM
Big congrats on your win, Mick!
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Mick Talbot
Date: 2/4/2018 8:15:00 PM
Thank Andrea, some amazing entries, well honoured I am!
Date: 2/4/2018 6:44:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win, Mick.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 2/4/2018 7:11:00 PM
Thank Line, some amazing entries, well honoured I am!
Date: 2/4/2018 4:36:00 PM
Great result Mick, well done. Regards Tom.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 2/4/2018 5:29:00 PM
Thank you, Tom, Just love the challenge!
Date: 2/4/2018 4:03:00 PM
Great imagery and great take on the contest Mick.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Mick Talbot
Date: 2/4/2018 5:22:00 PM
Thanks Silent, I think you were spoilt for choice, some amazing poetry to chose from!
Date: 2/3/2018 10:56:00 AM
Beautiful, great fluid diction and you started perfect and ended so smooth.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 2/3/2018 2:39:00 PM
Many thanks, Normie, your kind words appreciated! :-)
Date: 2/2/2018 12:24:00 PM
Hi Mick, You made good use of 128 words. I look forward to the "Spring" season.I was born in the Spring. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Mick Talbot
Date: 2/2/2018 5:37:00 PM
Thanks Alexis, fun to do, Silent One comes up with great poetry challenges! If you have entered, good luck to you too... Mick
Date: 1/31/2018 8:42:00 PM
Brilliantly done Mick. Good luck. Regards Tom.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 2/1/2018 4:31:00 AM
Again on both counts, thank you, Tom, appreciated ... Mick

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