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i whispered i love you, but i didnt expect you to whisper it back, when you said we wouldnt be able to talk much lately, something inside me snapped, then you found a way, and said 'see, i lied, we can still talk", making the blood pump faster through my heart, i said i love you more, you said no, you dont, you said you'd prove it, you've already proven your love, my angel, my savior, with you i feel complete, my sun, my starrs, for you my heart beats, could you ever really understand, what you have done for me, healed me, gained my trust, made me whole, set me free, i called you my angel, you said no, your just so sweet, said you were my savior, and those 3 words you did repeat, i sang to you our song, glitter, it shines upon our hearts, inside i was glowing, you ignighted the sparks you said you had to pick the perfect songs for the perfect girl, but im not perfect, as you are to me, baby you see; you are my angel, my savior, with you i feel complete, my sun, my starrs, for you my heart beats, could you ever really understand, what you have done for me, healed me, gained my trust, made me whole, set me free, you make me happy and fill that empty spot, sending kisses, hugs and everything else, with the peace that settles upon us, you take away the anxiety, once a plauge on my soul, and make me laugh with your explanation, your many years of pokemon training, that taught you patience and care, such an amazing man with your funny words and eyes into which i could stare, my angel, my savior, with you i feel complete, my sun, my starrs, for you my heart beats, could you ever really understand, what you have done for me, healed me, gained my trust, made me whole, set me free, my parents were argueing, you said sorry for it, i said worry not, nothing could upset me at the moment, you asked why not, because i have you, were my only words, i love you, and you keep me in this world, my angel, my savior, will you ever really understand, i didnt mean to, but i fell in love with this man, my sun, my starrs, my very best friend, my trust, my lover, in my heart till the end, with you i feel complete, for you my heart still beats, you healed me, gained my trust, didnt steal my heart, i gave it up, you make me whole, and it scares me sometimes, loved me, set me free, and brought the happiest tears to my eyes

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Date: 1/9/2010 10:26:00 PM
Rain I love this poem, I.m so glad I got to read it before I leave for a week. I gotta go to Wilmington Delaware and Scranton Pa. For the week. But look forward to reading all your poems and more. I put as many poems on as I could and the last was "just like rain" because I saved it for you for your name because you have given me more confidence as a writter and I thank you for that. Talk to ya soon.....Rob
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Date: 1/9/2010 10:48:00 AM
Amazing piece of love, truly your stanzas kiss my heart- edward
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