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1-22-10 Wipe It Away [for Matthew Miles]

Today, i was sad, filled with broken eyes tears seeping out like my unspoken lies so many things a plague on my heart afraid it would stop and never again restart but now im finding smiles come to my face as im sitting here talking to funny people, in this little white space black lines jot down across the screen some things just so funny they make me wanna scream now im laying on my back, in the summers green grass funny how all it takes is my mind and a few great laughs counting the starrs that i can still see breathing in deep the sweet grassy brease im watching the clouds, white and puffy they pass pointing out shapes and rolling in the grass asking you to join as we lay in the sun just trying to have a little uplifting fun funny how someone new, can just make me laugh and wipe away all the sorrowful sad

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/9/2010 1:14:00 PM
great rite i loved it with al my heart.. it touched me in a way that can't be explained in words love kevin
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Date: 2/1/2010 8:47:00 PM
He must be a lucky guy! he's a good guy.thats hard to find a genuine friend. and thank you again for the kind comments.
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Date: 1/25/2010 10:53:00 AM
Awesome tribute to fellow souper. Matthew is pretty cool.
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Date: 1/22/2010 1:19:00 PM
you really are a true talent and thisis a great read thank you for your comment
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Date: 1/22/2010 11:22:00 AM
I'm so glad I joined chat when I did & impressed you so. Thank you so much for a lovely little poem Rain. It has great rhythm. But you suck at hiding your nice. ^.^ Matt <3
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