.timeless.

Thorns on roses ticks, fleas on kittens no help for the poor snowball with no mittens cereal that's milkless. food with no taste no seconds in minutes elementary art without paste artists with no vision siblings without fighting t.v. with no color cake without icing talking without voices no roots beneath trees by understanding rainfall you understand me.

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Raul Moreno

Date: 5/3/2009 11:58:00 AM

Well, I have forgiven you but it will never be the same, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

Sue Mason

Date: 4/26/2009 1:07:00 PM

As I indicated in March, congratulations are in order for this wonderful write and now it is a "first round survivor" !! Good luck in the contest, Whatever You Want Your Name To Be.

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/14/2009 1:23:00 PM

this should be titled things that will never end. jhl

Samantha Mcdougal

Date: 4/4/2009 9:21:00 PM

No.

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 3/20/2009 11:17:00 PM

Very creative write here...Much to think about....(by understanding rainfall you understand me) Lovely ending. Congratulations on being featured this week..GB, Tyesha

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 3/19/2009 11:34:00 AM

congrats poet whose name is endless on your poem "Timeless" being featured. Vince

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/16/2009 6:04:00 PM

"Talking without voices" this is a beautiful line filled with depth and hidden meaning. Congratulations on being featured with this truthful write! Smiles from Lolita

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/16/2009 5:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your featured write of the week. Rainfall is beautiful. Love, Shar

Sue Mason

Date: 3/15/2009 12:24:00 PM

So overwhelmed was I by your name as shown here at the Soup ... I almost forgot to congratulate you on your writing being selected to be a feature this week. Congratulations!!

Sue Mason

Date: 3/15/2009 12:20:00 PM

Very creative write here, Ana. I do believe we know each other ... smile ...

Daver Austin

Date: 11/21/2008 3:54:00 PM

"Talking without voices?" This helps to understand you, Avana. You be a head person. How about letting us inside your head? Those voices inside your head are repetitious. Fill me in. You have a happy birthday Sunday, Ya hear. Love, daver

Michael Jordan

Date: 11/20/2008 9:38:00 AM

Avana - this poem is quite simply beautiful - Outstanding depth and truth - Great job on this - god Bless, MJ