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....The Shadows Call....

Beautiful butterflies swarming As the children run off laughing To play, beneath the cloud filled skies Mother smiling as she watches Remembering the cherishings; but thinking Of her very own, once upon a day.... Fluttering white snowflakes, beginning to descend Swaying and dancing within the gentle breeze Now rising, as the nightingale begins her song While the dusk begins to settle.... As she calls, from afar Returning--But they have changed.... Laughter abates, and smiles they fade As the creatures within the forest Bore their poisoned and sharpened fangs.... Snowflakes now sullied As they pierce this burning ground Butterflies fleeing, from these shadows That time has wrought, upon them all.... Dreams fading, from the purities Once known, but now lost As the fireflies with wings as arrows Through space, has bled their hearts.... Welcome, to the world, of--- ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ---The Shadows Call!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/11/2008 5:38:00 PM
John where can I purchase you book? I know from reading your works, that you have got to have a book out there that I can buy! Janice
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Date: 11/10/2008 2:57:00 PM
I love butterflies, this write make you ponder about the fate of the world but knowing that you have /God on your side there is nothing that he can not fix, love the metaphors within this write and the image that it protrays, take care D-ncye
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Date: 11/9/2008 5:00:00 PM
Ahhh...how horrible it would be to see one's child lose innocence to the 'arrows' of these 'fireflies'.:( Outstanding imagery and certainly something that parents should be in touch with. Children are so sweet and serene, but sometimes their innocence appears to be what draws these 'fireflies'. Wonderful piece, John, very thought provoking! God bless you and yours...Love to you..Mikki
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Date: 11/9/2008 1:29:00 PM
a beautiful piece of warm and tender poetry. thank you for reading my poem and for your comment. yes my health has not been to good be having test done and still have not found the problem, the insurance only pays so much and that is it, so will have to put it on hold for a while. thank you for your concern, your a good person who God has blessed with a gift for poetry.
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Date: 11/9/2008 3:38:00 AM
Yikes, best stay away fromTHAT forest! what a horrific tale! Well written, but horrible! lol love Kristin
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Date: 11/9/2008 12:01:00 AM
Goof morning John, Well this was one that started off with such beauty (and you know I love butterflies), but turns so dark at the end. Most thought provoking. I have one of my sisters visiting, which means less time online this week. Love, Nigel
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Date: 11/8/2008 11:36:00 PM
There was such depth in this write John! Everything was going so well and then it suddenly turns upside-down. I could see the life moving on. Well I really want more of it:) Love, Chitra
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Date: 11/8/2008 5:33:00 PM
This sounds like a fairy tale, yet turning grim and wicked towards the end...there must be more to the story yet to come. Yes...something from the Brothers Grim, but facinating and excellent writing, John! ~ Blessings..Carrie
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Date: 11/8/2008 5:22:00 PM
It went from beautiful to ugly real fast. It changed my thoughts thinking nice things in the begining and turning into a nightmare. John this is another of your excellent works I feel there is a sequel though. Blessings to you and yours
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