-spoon-Feed Them-
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I'm about to turn in my book "I AM THE LIVING PROOF - Jacqueline's Life, Purpose and Parables" As I'm editing it I noticed I used Hell a lot and I remembered someone asked me "why use hell?"
"Is it not the other word for that? We have to say it so people would wake up"
In my book is mostly constructive criticism" and my poem is my explanation.
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What is spoon-feed?
Feeding our thoughts
Sincerity, Honesty and Truth
Called Constructive Criticism
Striving to be at our best
Helping because of love
Care
Understanding
Motivated to Construct
Mistakes, Errors, Faults
It is okay
We are not perfect
Why use hell
Instead of Condemned?
Hell is Bulls Eye
Exact place when condemned
Copyright © Jacqueline R. Mendoza | Year Posted 2012
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