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I'm about to turn in my book "I AM THE LIVING PROOF - Jacqueline's Life, Purpose and Parables" As I'm editing it I noticed I used Hell a lot and I remembered someone asked me "why use hell?"

"Is it not the other word for that? We have to say it so people would wake up"

In my book is mostly constructive criticism" and my poem is my explanation.

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What is spoon-feed? Feeding our thoughts Sincerity, Honesty and Truth Called Constructive Criticism Striving to be at our best Helping because of love Care Understanding Motivated to Construct Mistakes, Errors, Faults It is okay We are not perfect Why use hell Instead of Condemned? Hell is Bulls Eye Exact place when condemned

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/27/2012 9:22:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Jacqueline. This week has flown by for me. I hope you enjoy your weekend and find the inspiration to write some more during this time. Love, Carol