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-caribbean Flavor-

Caribbean Flavor. ~~***~~ Cool Caribbean breeze Softly whispering your name Intoxicating. West Indies waters Cooling my heated body Invigorating. Tall coconut trees Towering over the sea Intimidating. ~~***~~

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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/27/2017 1:24:00 PM
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Awww! This is so very beautiful! It makes me feel nostalgic for the Caribbean which I love so much! The imagery is awesome, my friend! All the best. Pandita
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/17/2016 8:09:00 PM
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Yes, I envision and I feel the flavor of the Caribbean. I was able to take a cruise of the Bahamas a long time ago. Those were wonderful days. Never to return. This made me think of that.
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Jenni Kalicharan
Date: 9/17/2016 10:03:00 PM
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I am glad you've had a taste of the Caribbean. It really is a lovely place to live. Happy that my poem brought back good memories for you.. Thanks again... Jenni
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/17/2016 3:40:00 PM
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Considering this is your first Choka I must compliment you on this lovely poem, Jenni. I have always wanted to visit the Caribbean, and you tempt me even more with your words' flavour. (pls chk syllable count line 1) ~ Regards // paul
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Jenni Kalicharan
Date: 9/17/2016 10:00:00 PM
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Hi Paul, thank you so very much for your generous compliment! Thanks also for pointing out my mistake in the count of the first line. I looked it up and realised you are correct. Thanks again. Jenni
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/17/2016 6:37:00 AM
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And the three Choka stanzas enthralling all of us ...
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Jenni Kalicharan
Date: 9/17/2016 2:23:00 PM
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Thank you, Kind Sir.
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/17/2016 3:23:00 AM
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oh such beautiful imagery Jenni you are a very accomplished writer:-) hugs jan xx
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Jenni Kalicharan
Date: 9/17/2016 2:26:00 PM
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Wow!! I've never been referred to as an 'accomplished writer'. Thank you for your kind and encouraging words. Before yesterday I had never heard the word "Choka" in relation to poetry.

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