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city life with colorful neon signs of aluminum exhaust - an asphalt jungle without charm 06/07/2021 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Picture This 2 - 7 Lines Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May image 2 1st place in the contest

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Jan Allison

Date: 7/18/2021 5:21:00 PM

Dropping back with many congrats on your win Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/2/2022 12:21:00 PM

- Thank you very much for visiting and congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/16/2021 1:34:00 PM

Big cities are concrete jungles and glad I live in a very small city and can enjoy the countryside. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/2/2022 12:22:00 PM

- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/16/2021 7:51:00 AM

CONGRATS, ANNE LISE, PANGIE XXOO

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/2/2022 12:21:00 PM

- Thank you very much for visiting and congratulations, Pangie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 7/14/2021 6:41:00 AM

Wonderful write Anne, Congrats on your win

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/14/2021 11:09:00 AM

- Thank you very much for visiting and my win in your contest, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/12/2021 7:30:00 PM

Beautiful Work. Congratulations!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/14/2021 11:08:00 AM

- Thank you very much for visiting and congratulations, Alex :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/12/2021 4:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your great contest win; you deserve it with a very well-penned poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/14/2021 11:08:00 AM

- Thank you very much for visiting and congratulations, Las :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Marilene Evans

Date: 7/12/2021 3:47:00 PM

Congrats, Anne-Lise. Yes, nothing is changed in Times Square, still a jungle out there.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/14/2021 11:08:00 AM

- Thank you very much for visiting and congratulations, Marilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/11/2021 9:56:00 AM

0xygen there is such a desperate need for it at present, we are killing our planet both cities and jungles. The word Oxygen for me as from yesterday holds an even more significant meaning - my friend's father became a victim of covid because in the last 40 minutes of his life the family could not source oxygen in time to save him. Yet another death, our cousin died 3 weeks ago and an employee of ours working from home died last Saturday, 3 people, one related in 3 weeks. hugs and love, Jenny

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/11/2021 12:05:00 PM

- Terribly cruel, dear Jenny - In recent weeks, several covid-19 patients have died because hospitals have run out of oxygen ... it's a tragedy - hugs // Anne-Lise

Paul Callus

Date: 7/11/2021 3:23:00 AM

That is why I never grumble about my simple village country life, Anne-Lise! Have a lovely day! :) Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/14/2021 11:14:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/10/2021 3:01:00 PM

Good wishes to you,

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/14/2021 11:13:00 AM

- Pangie, many thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 7/9/2021 1:47:00 PM

That's the way I see it too. Best of luck in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/14/2021 11:13:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Scott :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/9/2021 12:24:00 PM

So true all the pollution is eating everything. All the best for contest

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/14/2021 11:12:00 AM

- Rama, many thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 7/7/2021 10:40:00 PM

Your poem of a city is spot on.... It works well with the photograph....Delice

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/14/2021 11:12:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Drlice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Duke Beaufort

Date: 7/7/2021 2:42:00 PM

Let's hope we seen the end of fossil fuels for transportation, agriculture, and power generation soon. I think that when people look back at these images years from now (if we haven't destroyed everything) they will say, what were those people thinking!! Thanks for the description and take care.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/14/2021 11:12:00 AM

- Duke, many thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/7/2021 11:59:00 AM

very nicely done, Sunshine. That was not the easiest of the pictures to write about

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/14/2021 11:11:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rico Leffanta

Date: 7/7/2021 11:48:00 AM

I wonder how Ilene and joggers can feel better after a walk/run in rush hour fumes? But cities offer young people more choices than a walk in the woods or in the surf. Good luck in the contest! Aloha! Rico

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/14/2021 11:11:00 AM

- Rico, many thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/7/2021 8:56:00 AM

Hi Anne Lise, What a good interpretation of the picture. Best wishes in the contest. I hope you are doing well:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/14/2021 11:11:00 AM

- Alexis, many thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/7/2021 1:25:00 AM

Best move I ever made was moving out of the city. You captured the city well in your haiku Anne. Greetings from Wales. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/14/2021 11:10:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comments and gretting from Wales, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/6/2021 11:20:00 PM

Excellent description of city life. Our small island has been destroyed with all the vehicles around. Lovely poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/11/2021 12:07:00 PM

- Victor, many thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shirley Candy

Date: 7/6/2021 10:11:00 PM

I like how you cleverly describe your point of view about city life in these 7 lines. Good luck with the contest..Anne! ~xoxo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/11/2021 12:06:00 PM

- Many thanks Shirley, for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/6/2021 4:37:00 PM

Great picture, short, concise, and profound, good luck in the contest, dear Anne-Lise, blessings and warm hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/11/2021 12:06:00 PM

- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Las :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Bayles

Date: 7/6/2021 1:55:00 PM

Very good picture of the city.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/6/2021 2:05:00 PM

- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 7/6/2021 1:30:00 PM

Perfect picture of city-life! Excellent Poem. Love ~ Mala

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/6/2021 1:53:00 PM

- Too much noise and bad air :) - Many thanks for the lovely comments, Mala :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/6/2021 1:04:00 PM

So right! So beautifully written! Good luck, dearest Anne-Lise. Hugs xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/6/2021 1:52:00 PM

- City life is not a place for me ... I need green grass, trees, flowers, wildlife and fresh air :) - Many thanks for lovely comments, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/6/2021 12:57:00 PM

City life is apt description--well done Anne-Lise--you captured the essence of the image given.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/6/2021 1:48:00 PM

- I appreciate your precious comment , thank you very much Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)