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- Titanic -

Mountain of ice                                 a scene so awfully 
                                /\                           0
               /\     ~      /   \                       o                /\
   ~~~~ /   \ ~~~~/      \   ^   /\        O o              /   \         ~~
                                      ¨~~/   \^^o 0 o------- /\   ....  /\ ~~ ooo /\ __
                 ~~                            Titanic 
                                                            sank                                                          
                                                     oo                       ~~ 
                             ~~                    ##                       darkness
                                                     xxxx 
                     ~~~~                      xxxx                in the
                                                II III IIIII                  ////
                                                                          sea 
                            (    cold ... deep         o      O                 )
                           _________     o                oo _________death
                         there are no ballrooms for dancing on the seabed
                           adventure - X - swallowed by the sea ////. \\\\
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07.05.2023
Anne-Lise Andresen
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no 1215
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
3rd place in the contest

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Paul Bell Date: 5/14/2023 1:29:00 AM Can't beat that for skill. Every time I go on a ship now, I always ask, how unsinkable is it. Login to Reply

Unseeking Seeker Date: 5/11/2023 7:37:00 PM Fabulous shape poem! Warmest congratulations on your win, in Brian’s contest, with a podium finish! Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 5/11/2023 1:24:00 PM You wrote a fantastic poem about "Titanic." I truly enjoyed it. Congratulations on your win Login to Reply

Sam Kauffman Date: 5/11/2023 9:09:00 AM Congratulations on your win Anne-Lise. "There are no ballrooms for dancing on the seabed." So poignant. Full of "impact!" So descriptive of the tragedy. Well done my friend. Blessings and hugs! Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 5/11/2023 1:57:00 AM Wow! So beautiful and creative! I love and extremely enjoy this. Congratulations on your shining win my dear poet friend Anne-Lise! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs Login to Reply

Roger Roger Date: 5/11/2023 1:33:00 AM Wow... Both lyrical and artistic... Congratulations... Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/10/2023 6:33:00 PM there are no ballrooms for dancing on the seabed adventure…Wow! Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 5/9/2023 2:25:00 AM Great work, Anne-lise:) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/9/2023 2:34:00 AM - Thank you, Jo :)

Sotto Poet Date: 5/8/2023 10:43:00 AM Very creative and perfectly designed, Anne. A winner for sure, but good luck anyway Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/9/2023 2:12:00 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Las :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/8/2023 8:01:00 AM That was one sad event in the history of our world. So many thought it was going to be a great time at sea and a lovely visit to another country. Only a few survived. Thanks for sharing this one and for stopping by my page. It reads like a good contender for Brian's contest to me. Way to go. Sara Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/8/2023 8:29:00 AM - A journey that was supposed to be a pleasure... ended terribly, Sara - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit Date: 5/8/2023 5:40:00 AM Creative design. You will be rewarded with a win, Anne-Lise. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/8/2023 6:45:00 AM - Thank you, Vijay :)

Kim Merryman Date: 5/7/2023 8:43:00 PM Anne-Lise, this is an amazing shape poem! Very well done! Blessings, Kim M Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/8/2023 1:25:00 AM - Thank you, Kim :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/7/2023 4:22:00 PM very cool indeed. loved that bottom part and the line about dancing. it was sad how the band kept playing as they sank. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/8/2023 1:25:00 AM - Thank you, Andrea :)

Ilene Bauer Date: 5/7/2023 12:40:00 PM This is amazingly cool, Anne-Lise! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/7/2023 1:18:00 PM - Thank you, Ilene :)

Lin Lane Date: 5/7/2023 11:51:00 AM Anne-Lise, you have great skill in word art. It's very impressive, even without the words! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/7/2023 1:18:00 PM - Thank you, Lin :)