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22.09.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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                                        lace curtain yellowed
                                    housekeeper long time ago -
                                        the frame's reflection

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Karen Croft Date: 10/10/2023 1:01:00 AM Enjoyed reading Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/10/2023 1:12:00 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Karen :) - hugs

Joanna Daniel Date: 9/26/2023 8:48:00 PM Great one, Anne-lise:) ignites memories:) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/27/2023 2:20:00 AM - Thank you very much, Jo :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 9/25/2023 4:12:00 PM One keenly feels the passage of time in this lovely presentation. :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/26/2023 12:33:00 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Evelyn :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/25/2023 9:34:00 AM A ghostlike reflection of the past. I love lace curtains. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/25/2023 12:12:00 PM - Many thanks for your comment, Kim :) - hugs

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 9/24/2023 2:42:00 PM Hi Anne-Lise ,yellow tinged curtains, the house keeper has left - sounds like a mystery, is there perhaps a lonely old person living there who can't maintain the house anymore because he or she is not well enough or has it been abandoned, the woodwork seems grubby and needs a coat of paint, what does the window reflect - such sadness, maybe a key under the stone near the door would clear up everything. I love this poem, such profound poetry. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/25/2023 12:11:00 PM - Many thanks for your comment, Jenny :) - hugs

Ink Empress Date: 9/24/2023 3:29:00 AM So much depth in your senryu, i felt so much reading this. It always is impressive how one can convey and evoke so much through few words, i admire that. A very evocative write this is. Soul stirring and leaves an impression, sadness of whats left behind. Sending you light always Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/25/2023 12:11:00 PM - Many thanks for your comment, Ink :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar Date: 9/24/2023 1:27:00 AM Splendid. Your imagery is perfect and made me read it again. Well done, Anne Lise. Hugs xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/25/2023 12:11:00 PM - Many thanks for your comment, Victor :) - hugs

Len Gasun Date: 9/22/2023 7:53:00 PM A beautiful senryu that brings both beautiful and sad memories my dear poet friend Anne -Lise. It reminds me of the house of my grandpa who just passed away last week. I hope his house will still be maintained by someone else or by his faithful housekeeper/caregiver even if he's gone. If not, it'll look exactly the same. I love and enjoyed your poem immensely. Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/25/2023 12:10:00 PM - Many thanks for your comment, Leonora :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick Date: 9/22/2023 12:46:00 PM Sad to see a house that has become abandoned and going to decay. It makes me want to buy it and remodel it and sell to someone who would look after it for another 100 years. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/25/2023 12:09:00 PM - Many thanks for your comment, Sara :) - hugs

Eve Roper Date: 9/22/2023 11:40:00 AM Perfect Senryu , old lace, reflection of the outside world. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/25/2023 12:08:00 PM - Many thanks for your comment, Eve :) - hugs

Silent One Date: 9/22/2023 11:16:00 AM Great use of the form.. you really created imagery here. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/25/2023 12:08:00 PM - Many thanks for your comment, S.O. :) - hugs

Jay Narain Date: 9/22/2023 10:38:00 AM Nice haiku. Curtains need cleaning once a while before they get yellow and tarnished. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/25/2023 12:08:00 PM - Many thanks for your comment, Jay :) - hugs

Sotto Poet Date: 9/22/2023 5:14:00 AM You conveyed a wonderful picture in this well-composed haiku, Anne-Lise...The language you employ is flawless, and your metaphors and so descriptive. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/25/2023 12:08:00 PM - Many thanks for your comment, Las :) - hugs

Lin Lane Date: 9/22/2023 3:28:00 AM You have a very good eye for composition, Anne-Lise. I am left wondering who hung those romantic lace curtains and why they've been neglected to hang tattered. Sad thoughts but your photography skill has led me to them. Using the short Senryu form lends itself to the mystery. Hugs. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/25/2023 12:07:00 PM - Many thanks for your comment, Lin :) - hugs