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- The Taste of Love In the Rain -

A smooth summer rain drums on the umbrella
In a city where everything flies so fast
She could see him from a long distance
The heart beats an extra stroke - or more
Eight years have passed since their paths parted
The fate had brought them back together
He meets her with a smile and a soft butterfly kiss
like a tune filled with joy

"Finally at home" he says and kisses her once more
The feeling tears her under the red umbrella
Every raindrop felt like a kiss from heaven
He is the most beautiful man she has met
Amor can rest, he knows this is true love









30/10/2018
Sun :) A-L Andresen :)
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Debbie Duncan Date: 11/16/2018 1:15:00 PM Oh, I like this :) How you doing ? Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/16/2018 1:19:00 PM - Thank you, Debbie :) - I'm ok :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jessica Thompson Date: 11/3/2018 3:17:00 PM Such a lovely piece Anne-Lise. I really enjoyed the story it painted of true love. May today find you well. Hugs, jess Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/3/2018 3:24:00 PM - Many thanks for your visit and your lovely comment, Jessica :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven Date: 11/2/2018 5:20:00 AM Hi Anne-Lise, this is a free verse gem. You use the scope of this form in such a wonderful way. Your creativity shines in this most excellent write. The love creates such wonderful moments and your words do paint such a wonderful canvas for the mind to view. Such a tender write that speaks to the heart. Has to be a fave Anne-Lise. A little gem from your golden pen. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/2/2018 7:59:00 AM - Many thanks, Mike ... greatly appreciates your visit ... so glad you liked this and fav. it :) - Have a lovely Friday and enjoy a nice weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 10/31/2018 12:34:00 PM Wow, when "every raindrop feels like a kiss from heaven," you know it is true love. This would have been a beautiful entry for the contest as you created an original scenario and made us care about the two characters. Beautifully done, Sunshine! Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/31/2018 12:57:00 PM - Eve, want poems on rhyme Carolyn - I'm not so good at rhyming in English :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 10/31/2018 12:11:00 PM How romantic and tender love story dearest Anne-Lise! Beautifully written! Loved it! Hugs XXX Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/31/2018 12:58:00 PM - Many thanks for your visit and your lovely comment, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile Date: 10/31/2018 9:27:00 AM Love ion the rain. one of the most romantic scenarios that I can think of! A sweet and lovey poem to read Anne-Lise and a lovely diversion from the anxieties of life xxoo Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/31/2018 1:14:00 PM - If rain was love and romance ... I had drowned many years ago ... here it has almost rained every day since August, Mike - Many thanks for lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/31/2018 8:45:00 AM This is so sweet! ;0) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/31/2018 1:08:00 PM - Many thanks .... always a pleasure to see you, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 10/31/2018 6:16:00 AM so soft and tender , a soothe for the imagination and the heart. Have a wonderful day dear Smiley one. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/31/2018 1:07:00 PM - Thank you very much, Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 10/31/2018 4:43:00 AM There is something so romantic about the rain. I loved this delightful, romantic poem! xxoo Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/31/2018 4:59:00 AM - In my "real life", Connie ... we have too much rain ... rain is wet and cold :))) - Many thanks for lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer Date: 10/30/2018 6:34:00 PM very beautiful and touching, anne-lise! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/31/2018 4:56:00 AM - Thank you very much, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker Date: 10/30/2018 5:49:00 PM very romantic poetry dear poet Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/31/2018 4:55:00 AM - Thank you very much, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 10/30/2018 3:55:00 PM Feelings of love and joy beautifully captured..you depicted that photo in your splendid words, Anne-Lise. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/31/2018 4:54:00 AM - Vijay, thanks for lovely comment :) - Always a pleasure to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham Date: 10/30/2018 3:35:00 PM Beautiful verse Sunshine, you've captured the scene well with your pen. Tom. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/31/2018 4:53:00 AM - Many thanks Tom .... always a pleasure to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands Date: 10/30/2018 3:33:00 PM Beautifully written Anne-Lise. This is so nice. I enjoyed it very much :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/31/2018 4:51:00 AM - Many thanks for your comment and visit, glad you enjoy it Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green Date: 10/30/2018 3:03:00 PM This was beautiful my friend. You have captured the image wonderfully with your words. They really touched my heart because this is how it is suppose to feel. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/31/2018 4:51:00 AM - Many thanks for your comment and visit, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)