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OPEN THE EYES OF MY HEART LORD

A smooth summer rain drums on the umbrella In a city where everything flies so fast She could see him from a long distance The heart beats an extra stroke - or more Eight years have passed since their paths parted The fate had brought them back together He meets her with a smile and a soft butterfly kiss like a tune filled with joy "Finally at home" he says and kisses her once more The feeling tears her under the red umbrella Every raindrop felt like a kiss from heaven He is the most beautiful man she has met Amor can rest, he knows this is true love 30/10/2018 Sun :) A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 11/16/2018 1:15:00 PM

Oh, I like this :) How you doing ?

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2018 1:19:00 PM

- Thank you, Debbie :) - I'm ok :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jt Nyx

Date: 11/3/2018 3:17:00 PM

Such a lovely piece Anne-Lise. I really enjoyed the story it painted of true love. May today find you well. Hugs, jess

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/3/2018 3:24:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and your lovely comment, Jessica :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/2/2018 5:20:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, this is a free verse gem. You use the scope of this form in such a wonderful way. Your creativity shines in this most excellent write. The love creates such wonderful moments and your words do paint such a wonderful canvas for the mind to view. Such a tender write that speaks to the heart. Has to be a fave Anne-Lise. A little gem from your golden pen. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/2/2018 7:59:00 AM

- Many thanks, Mike ... greatly appreciates your visit ... so glad you liked this and fav. it :) - Have a lovely Friday and enjoy a nice weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/31/2018 12:34:00 PM

Wow, when "every raindrop feels like a kiss from heaven," you know it is true love. This would have been a beautiful entry for the contest as you created an original scenario and made us care about the two characters. Beautifully done, Sunshine! Hugs, Carolyn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2018 12:57:00 PM

- Eve, want poems on rhyme Carolyn - I'm not so good at rhyming in English :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/31/2018 12:11:00 PM

How romantic and tender love story dearest Anne-Lise! Beautifully written! Loved it! Hugs XXX

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2018 12:58:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and your lovely comment, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/31/2018 9:27:00 AM

Love ion the rain. one of the most romantic scenarios that I can think of! A sweet and lovey poem to read Anne-Lise and a lovely diversion from the anxieties of life xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2018 1:14:00 PM

- If rain was love and romance ... I had drowned many years ago ... here it has almost rained every day since August, Mike - Many thanks for lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/31/2018 8:45:00 AM

This is so sweet! ;0)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2018 1:08:00 PM

- Many thanks .... always a pleasure to see you, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/31/2018 6:16:00 AM

so soft and tender , a soothe for the imagination and the heart. Have a wonderful day dear Smiley one.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2018 1:07:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/31/2018 4:43:00 AM

There is something so romantic about the rain. I loved this delightful, romantic poem! xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2018 4:59:00 AM

- In my "real life", Connie ... we have too much rain ... rain is wet and cold :))) - Many thanks for lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/30/2018 6:34:00 PM

very beautiful and touching, anne-lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2018 4:56:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 10/30/2018 5:49:00 PM

very romantic poetry dear poet

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2018 4:55:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/30/2018 3:55:00 PM

Feelings of love and joy beautifully captured..you depicted that photo in your splendid words, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2018 4:54:00 AM

- Vijay, thanks for lovely comment :) - Always a pleasure to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/30/2018 3:35:00 PM

Beautiful verse Sunshine, you've captured the scene well with your pen. Tom.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2018 4:53:00 AM

- Many thanks Tom .... always a pleasure to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/30/2018 3:33:00 PM

Beautifully written Anne-Lise. This is so nice. I enjoyed it very much :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2018 4:51:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment and visit, glad you enjoy it Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 10/30/2018 3:03:00 PM

This was beautiful my friend. You have captured the image wonderfully with your words. They really touched my heart because this is how it is suppose to feel.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2018 4:51:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment and visit, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)