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scène de ménage (déjà vu!)

 

* The cuckoo is a symbol of unrequited love 




Jealousy is not the fear of losing
but the feeling that our position is threatened
As wet sand between your toes, unwanted

Sometimes jealousy turns into obsession
There are many wars, love your enemies ... never
We fight for love as a tender and small sparrow
Bitter taste, there is a fly in the soup











  17.01.2017
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Date: 5/22/2017 4:46:00 PM
so much truth in your words Anne Lise I hope one day I can get rid of that pesky fly!!!:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/28/2017 10:04:00 PM
Good write.
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Date: 1/29/2017 6:00:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visit and nice comments, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/20/2017 12:53:00 PM
Jealousy causes internal erosion and pain...is it worth it?! Of course, one has to fight for love, but not at having to pay too dear a price!! hugs // paul
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Date: 1/20/2017 1:38:00 PM
- Thanks for friendly visit and nice comments, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/19/2017 7:13:00 AM
So much truth said in so few words, I think envy is one of the worst human emotions, excellent poem, brilliant picture, one for my treasure chest.
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Date: 1/20/2017 1:37:00 PM
- Roy, thanks for friendly visit and nice comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/19/2017 12:33:00 AM
Very true, Anne-lise:) Proverbs 14:30 - "A sound heart is the life of the flesh, but envy the rottenness of bones"
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Date: 1/19/2017 3:08:00 AM
- Jo, thanks for friendly visit and nice comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/18/2017 4:10:00 PM
Absolute truth!! Excellent piece my friend..
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Date: 1/19/2017 3:07:00 AM
- Arlene nice to see you , thanks for friendly visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/18/2017 10:30:00 AM
I was drawn in by the title and your words ring so true.. I guess at times we are all cuckoo...Well penned Sunshine
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Date: 1/18/2017 12:51:00 PM
- Thanks for friendly visit and nice comments, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/18/2017 9:05:00 AM
How deep and appealing writing my friend, Anne-Lise! I love the picture as much! A seven for both!
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Date: 1/18/2017 12:51:00 PM
- A pleasure you liked it dear Demetrios, thank you for visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/18/2017 6:36:00 AM
This is a good read, Anne Lise
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Date: 1/18/2017 7:27:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visit and nice comments, Wilfred :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/17/2017 11:42:00 PM
Very funny x and true x great poem x
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Date: 1/18/2017 3:28:00 AM
- Wendy, thanks for friendly visit and nice comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/17/2017 9:05:00 PM
Love this!! So much truth in it.
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Date: 1/18/2017 3:42:00 AM
- Truth with a smile, Andrea :) - Thanks for friendly visit and nice comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/17/2017 3:05:00 PM
love is positive, it has nothing to do with negativity.. i love your art Sunshine, and the anime, humorous yet it carries a message..
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Date: 1/18/2017 3:33:00 AM
- Love is the most beautiful thing on earth - Mixing humor with truth we accept the message with a smile, Neo :) - Thanks for friendly visit and nice comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/17/2017 2:51:00 PM
One I love the picture two the poem so true Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/18/2017 3:28:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visit and nice comments, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/17/2017 2:07:00 PM
We all crave love and fear someone taking it away....love the kitty
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Date: 1/17/2017 2:13:00 PM
- But no own the love, Tim - The fear of losing ... is love too :) - Thanks for friendly visit and nice comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/17/2017 1:38:00 PM
Nice poem, Anne-Lise! LOL on the cartoon.
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Date: 1/17/2017 2:03:00 PM
- Kim, thanks for visiting and your smile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/17/2017 1:36:00 PM
The moral being, always have a umbrella at the ready? Fun stuff Anne-Lise...
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Date: 1/17/2017 1:41:00 PM
:))) ... an umbrella is great, Charlie :))) - Thanks for visiting and smiley comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/17/2017 1:18:00 PM
your confidence glows ; no need to be jealous, anne... love this with that pic .. happy huggs
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Date: 1/17/2017 1:27:00 PM
- I did not suffer from this disease, Nette - Thank you for the first comments :) - happy hugs // Anne-Lise :)