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- the Soup Cuckoo -

Jealousy is not the fear of losing
but the feeling that our position is threatened
As wet sand between your toes, unwanted

Sometimes jealousy turns into obsession
There are many wars, love your enemies ... never
We fight for love as a tender and small sparrow
Bitter taste, there is a fly in the soup











  17.01.2017
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Jan Allison Date: 5/22/2017 4:46:00 PM so much truth in your words Anne Lise I hope one day I can get rid of that pesky fly!!!:-( hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Newton Ranaweera Date: 1/28/2017 10:04:00 PM Good write. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/29/2017 6:00:00 AM - Thanks for friendly visit and nice comments, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus Date: 1/20/2017 12:53:00 PM Jealousy causes internal erosion and pain...is it worth it?! Of course, one has to fight for love, but not at having to pay too dear a price!! hugs // paul Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2017 1:38:00 PM - Thanks for friendly visit and nice comments, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Roy Pett Date: 1/19/2017 7:13:00 AM So much truth said in so few words, I think envy is one of the worst human emotions, excellent poem, brilliant picture, one for my treasure chest. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2017 1:37:00 PM - Roy, thanks for friendly visit and nice comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel Date: 1/19/2017 12:33:00 AM Very true, Anne-lise:) Proverbs 14:30 - "A sound heart is the life of the flesh, but envy the rottenness of bones" Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2017 3:08:00 AM - Jo, thanks for friendly visit and nice comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arlene Smith Date: 1/18/2017 4:10:00 PM Absolute truth!! Excellent piece my friend.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2017 3:07:00 AM - Arlene nice to see you , thanks for friendly visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 1/18/2017 10:30:00 AM I was drawn in by the title and your words ring so true.. I guess at times we are all cuckoo...Well penned Sunshine Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/18/2017 12:51:00 PM - Thanks for friendly visit and nice comments, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/18/2017 9:05:00 AM How deep and appealing writing my friend, Anne-Lise! I love the picture as much! A seven for both! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/18/2017 12:51:00 PM - A pleasure you liked it dear Demetrios, thank you for visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Wilfred Aniagyei Date: 1/18/2017 6:36:00 AM This is a good read, Anne Lise Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/18/2017 7:27:00 AM - Thanks for friendly visit and nice comments, Wilfred :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Wendy Rycroft Date: 1/17/2017 11:42:00 PM Very funny x and true x great poem x Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/18/2017 3:28:00 AM - Wendy, thanks for friendly visit and nice comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/17/2017 9:05:00 PM Love this!! So much truth in it. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/18/2017 3:42:00 AM - Truth with a smile, Andrea :) - Thanks for friendly visit and nice comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Neo Masetlane Date: 1/17/2017 3:05:00 PM love is positive, it has nothing to do with negativity.. i love your art Sunshine, and the anime, humorous yet it carries a message.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/18/2017 3:33:00 AM - Love is the most beautiful thing on earth - Mixing humor with truth we accept the message with a smile, Neo :) - Thanks for friendly visit and nice comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper Date: 1/17/2017 2:51:00 PM One I love the picture two the poem so true Hugs Eve Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/18/2017 3:28:00 AM - Thanks for friendly visit and nice comments, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith Date: 1/17/2017 2:07:00 PM We all crave love and fear someone taking it away....love the kitty Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/17/2017 2:13:00 PM - But no own the love, Tim - The fear of losing ... is love too :) - Thanks for friendly visit and nice comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/17/2017 1:38:00 PM Nice poem, Anne-Lise! LOL on the cartoon. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/17/2017 2:03:00 PM - Kim, thanks for visiting and your smile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith Date: 1/17/2017 1:36:00 PM The moral being, always have a umbrella at the ready? Fun stuff Anne-Lise... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/17/2017 1:41:00 PM :))) ... an umbrella is great, Charlie :))) - Thanks for visiting and smiley comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 1/17/2017 1:18:00 PM your confidence glows ; no need to be jealous, anne... love this with that pic .. happy huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/17/2017 1:27:00 PM - I did not suffer from this disease, Nette - Thank you for the first comments :) - happy hugs // Anne-Lise :)