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Don't step on me sweet Marie This world is so big I'm not a candy polka pig Bend down on your knees please, Louise Hello, James are you ready for guessing games ? He knew how to be friendly always spoke gently When the grass turns yellow and dries without the shell I may die I believe you realize it I'm slimy, yes I admit My name is Arden I live in this garden I carry my house on my back and sets out on my track Ha,ha did you guess I was a whale? No, I'm a happy little snail 02.11.2022 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper 3rd place in the contest

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Date: 11/23/2022 12:02:00 AM
So delightful and interesting children's rhyme my dear friend Annelise. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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Date: 11/22/2022 2:10:00 PM
Really cute poem, Anne-Lise - perfect for children. Snail is such an admirable creature!
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Date: 11/21/2022 10:23:00 PM
A very interesting rhyme. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/21/2022 8:15:00 PM
Sunshine, thank you for entering the contest. I really enjoyed your creative children nursery poem, . Congratulations on your win. Many blessings to you and yours. Hugs & Love Eve
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Date: 11/4/2022 10:21:00 PM
What a super poem. Children would love it. I love it !
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Date: 11/15/2022 1:45:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Wendy :) - hugs
Date: 11/3/2022 11:52:00 AM
Admirably written, my dearest, Anne-Lise. Hugs xxx and blessings!
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Date: 11/15/2022 1:45:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Demetrios :) - hugs
Date: 11/2/2022 10:07:00 PM
Very Very Nice All the best. Have Good Days
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Date: 11/3/2022 3:49:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Anisha :) - hugs
Date: 11/2/2022 6:47:00 PM
So very cute. I am sure children will love this ! Great for a win ! All the Best, dear Smile....Love and hugs !
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Date: 11/3/2022 3:49:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Valsa :) - hugs
Date: 11/2/2022 3:05:00 PM
Great sense of humour. Hugs.
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Date: 11/3/2022 3:48:00 AM
- Thanks, Victor - hugs
Date: 11/2/2022 2:48:00 PM
Very cute Sunshine. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 11/3/2022 3:47:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Heidi :) - hugs
Date: 11/2/2022 1:20:00 PM
A lovely nursery rhyme Anne, best of luck in the contest. What a coincidence you and Terry went for the snail. Tom
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Date: 11/2/2022 1:24:00 PM
- Yeah, that was fun ... snails are not something I think about everyday :) - Many thanks for your comment, Tom :) - hugs
Date: 11/2/2022 12:47:00 PM
Smashing poem for the kiddies and for Eve’s contest. Can’t believe we both went for the gastropod angle… I sat for ages, trying to think of something cuddly but different to write about. A case of great minds think alike. All the best in the contest, Anne-Lise. Terry
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Date: 11/2/2022 12:54:00 PM
- Children are curious about small animals ... yes, I thought the same, Terry ... something different :) - We even posted at the same time :) - hugs
Date: 11/2/2022 12:47:00 PM
A lovely snail tale Anne-Lise, kiddies will love it. All the best for Eve’s contest… Belle
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Date: 11/2/2022 12:55:00 PM
- I hope she will like it, thank you very much Belle :) - hugs