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- The Snail - Nursery Rhyme -

    Don't step on me
    sweet Marie

    This world is so big
    I'm not a candy polka pig

    Bend down on your knees
    please, Louise

    Hello, James
    are you ready for guessing games ?

    He knew how to be friendly
    always spoke gently

    When the grass turns yellow and dries
    without the shell I may die

    I believe you realize it
    I'm slimy, yes I admit

    My name is Arden
    I live in this garden

    I carry my house on my back
    and sets out on my track

    Ha,ha did you guess I was a whale?
    No, I'm a happy little snail





    

    02.11.2022
    Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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    Poetry Contest
    Sponsored by: Eve Roper

    3rd place in the contest

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Len Gasun Date: 11/23/2022 12:02:00 AM So delightful and interesting children's rhyme my dear friend Annelise. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs Login to Reply

Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 11/22/2022 2:10:00 PM Really cute poem, Anne-Lise - perfect for children. Snail is such an admirable creature! Login to Reply

Christuraj Alex Date: 11/21/2022 10:23:00 PM A very interesting rhyme. Congratulations! Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 11/21/2022 8:15:00 PM Sunshine, thank you for entering the contest. I really enjoyed your creative children nursery poem, . Congratulations on your win. Many blessings to you and yours. Hugs & Love Eve Login to Reply

Speaks Volumes Date: 11/4/2022 10:21:00 PM What a super poem. Children would love it. I love it ! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/15/2022 1:45:00 AM - Thank you very much, Wendy :) - hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 11/3/2022 11:52:00 AM Admirably written, my dearest, Anne-Lise. Hugs xxx and blessings! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/15/2022 1:45:00 AM - Thank you very much, Demetrios :) - hugs

Anisha Dutta Date: 11/2/2022 10:07:00 PM Very Very Nice All the best. Have Good Days Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/3/2022 3:49:00 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Anisha :) - hugs

Valsa George Date: 11/2/2022 6:47:00 PM So very cute. I am sure children will love this ! Great for a win ! All the Best, dear Smile....Love and hugs ! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/3/2022 3:49:00 AM - Thank you very much, Valsa :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar Date: 11/2/2022 3:05:00 PM Great sense of humour. Hugs. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/3/2022 3:48:00 AM - Thanks, Victor - hugs

Heidi Sands Date: 11/2/2022 2:48:00 PM Very cute Sunshine. Good luck in the contest :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/3/2022 3:47:00 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Heidi :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham Date: 11/2/2022 1:20:00 PM A lovely nursery rhyme Anne, best of luck in the contest. What a coincidence you and Terry went for the snail. Tom Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/2/2022 1:24:00 PM - Yeah, that was fun ... snails are not something I think about everyday :) - Many thanks for your comment, Tom :) - hugs

Terry Flood Date: 11/2/2022 12:47:00 PM Smashing poem for the kiddies and for Eve’s contest. Can’t believe we both went for the gastropod angle… I sat for ages, trying to think of something cuddly but different to write about. A case of great minds think alike. All the best in the contest, Anne-Lise. Terry Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/2/2022 12:54:00 PM - Children are curious about small animals ... yes, I thought the same, Terry ... something different :) - We even posted at the same time :) - hugs

Beryl Edmonds Date: 11/2/2022 12:47:00 PM A lovely snail tale Anne-Lise, kiddies will love it. All the best for Eve’s contest… Belle Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/2/2022 12:55:00 PM - I hope she will like it, thank you very much Belle :) - hugs