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- the Naked Truth -

We are all brothers and sisters born without hate 
Naked we were born to earth with purity and innocence as Lily 

Love has no barriers beyond our earthly grasp 
Right actions coming from the right setting, it starts from within 

Sometimes we feel we are living inside a bubble 
To live a good life, we must think, speak and act correctly 

Destiny paints our divine promise colors a rainbow 
Everything's really just small adjustments in your life 

The search for the true love with joy and confidence in this world 
Let your light shine bright, love inside the heart last forever 

Of life our guiding angels a choir heavenly glamor 
Angels over flowing universe with its clean and deep strength 


Written by Liam Mcdaid & A-L Andresen 
11.03.2015 Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/4/2015 8:47:00 AM

I read this on the other side I loved it then and I love it now.

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/1/2015 4:47:00 PM

Beautiful collab and congrats to both of you. Nicely expressed a nice message. 7 i feel. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Constance La France

Date: 3/31/2015 3:34:00 PM

liam, you an Anne Lise did a wonderful job together writing this beautiful poem, A7 and thanks for visiting my poetry . . .

Robert Lindley

Date: 3/30/2015 7:09:00 PM

Super 7 on this one. Congrats to you both. Message and flow are exceptional. Bravoooooooo!!!! Liam and Anne

James Peranteau

Date: 3/30/2015 3:25:00 PM

Well, I came to take a peeps tah see what kind of writes you express, seeing you did a collab with a poet I knows and seen, yet again another fine collab betwixt the both of you ! Great write dear poet ! Have a wonderful week.....much love, james

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 3/30/2015 2:41:00 PM

Hello Liam and Anne-Lise!Very beautiful pens!Another wonderful collaboration from you my dearest friends.Just dazzling!A huge 7 +++to each!A very inspiring uplifting piece about true love,dreams,hopes,friendship,kindness,respect,love,forgiveness,not hating, hurting,saying and spreading lies,not judging and destroying peoples reputations and lives with lies,this is a terrible nightmare,just so horrible when people do this to others anywhere.Excellent poem you've written with a very beautiful positive message.smiling.Enjoyed it!:)Truly mighty golden pens!Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxoxD.^O^